Wow where to start... This was seriously a great story. I was a little apprehensive to read anymore GX fanfics since it's mostly overrun by OCs and sister fics which aren't really my thing, but this was amazing! The spot-on characterization was amazing and your writing style was very nice. Thank you for this awesome story!

Wow this was so sad. Poor Shou! You'll always be Judai's first friend! This was written really well and I could feel like how Shou was feeling!

Great story!

Great character analysis here. You basically listed every reason why Johan is such a poorly written character through Shou's perspective. I always felt bad for the way he was reduced to bystander status in season 3.

Great description of Shou's feelings. It's basically exactly what he portrays throughout the anime, I like that a lot.

Even though this was short, it was a good one-shot. Keep up the good work!