Reviews for Mine
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2018
Rereading Deyna stories because I just miss them so much. I must say, I absolutely love this one! SO sexy but also so true to what we think their characters would say and do. I love the passion and desire they have for one another. If the show had written it, they would have Marcus tell Rayna he saw the whole thing and then she would be mad at Deacon... So glad it was written by you!
SetV chapter 1 . 8/22/2017
holy crap, that was beyond hot. So wrong of Deacon to let Markus see that without Rayna's consent and yet it was so very, very hot and why have you only written one fic with those two. Devastating to look for more and finding only one fic but if it had to be a single fic I'm so happy you wrote this one.
Calculated Artificiality chapter 1 . 12/29/2016
FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY, WHY HAVE YOU ONLY WRITTEN ONE STORY? This is brilliant.
amy chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
hot!
Rhaized chapter 1 . 12/15/2015
Great story! I think you captured Deacon's voice perfectly, and I love how Markus cock-blocked them, lol. Definitely seems like something he would do, and I love how awkward Rayna was about it because she really would be.

The sex scene was written well (it was explicit but wasn't tacky or too graphic - you captured a good balance of everything, and it fit into the story well) and I do like how Markus was able to see it. I mean, a part of me feels bad for Rayna because I know she'd be mortified if she knew someone saw her like that (in her most private setting), but I think this definitely sent the message clearly to Markus whereas, as we saw in the show, Rayna's little speech didn't get it across as clear.

Bravo! Thanks for writing this story and I hope to see more!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2015
This was SO good! Please write some more! You've got fans here
Caitlyn Rose chapter 1 . 12/4/2015
Seems to me that it would be really difficult to write a sex scene that treats the subject matter candidly and ends up feeling adult and sexy and personal to the characters you're writing about - kudos to you for doing that! Even though this was obviously explicit, I didn't feel like it was "smut" in the typical fanfic sense of being just a random sex scene that could almost be between anybody. That really was due to the fact that your writing from the outset was smooth and easy to read, and you set the whole thing up with dialogue that felt true to Rayna and Deacon. I'd love to see more writers coming up with stories for this pairing, so hope to see more from you!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
This is exactly how the sneak peek should end :) If only Nashville aired on Showtime. Thanks for indulging our smutty Deyna fantasy - this was hottttt!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
This is the ideal ending to the sneak peek :) Too bad Nashville isn't on Showtime! Thanks for writing this - smutty Rayna and Deacon is always my favorite!
Alicia85 chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
Bloody loved that hot Deyna jealous Deacon fricking brilliant xx
JA chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
Someone dump ice water on me stay. Wow. Please write more! It's going to be a never-ending hiatus. And can I say it was hard to watch the last ep and all the studio/couch scenes without thinking of this. Bless you ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
OMG - More. Please. ASAP.
Guest01 chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
Wow! Steamy stuff. It doesn't get better than that.
Please write some more.
Thanks.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
Um HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT, One of the best Deyna ADULT fanfics I've read. So good and extremely hot. These two re on FIRE. Thank you so much for writing this and I agree with everyone, more please.
85Alicia chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
Omg thank u soooo much this was freaking hot I don't even know where to begin I'm all hot and bothered just fantastic sent u a private DM of praise too. More asap plz xx
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