Reviews for The Demise
gginsc chapter 8 . 8/11
Good story.
mysuvone chapter 8 . 7/7
very good i like it when dudley gets a clue
mysuvone chapter 1 . 7/7
hmmm so far i like it.
Bronze chapter 6 . 10/10/2019
Ya, old moldy Voldie must be extremely happy that Harry didn't show up at Hogwarts. Probably believe the stone's there as well. But if there is a stone it's very likely a fake. Either Nicolas or Fumblemort created it just to sucker the other old fool in. I really must ask, Is Hogwarts a school or high-security vault system? It certainly can't be both! Thus, I'd bet the Board of Governors doesn't know anything about this. This is the main reason ol' Fumblemort should be sacked as Headmaster of the school. His first responsibility is supposed to be the safety of the students under his care! Not sucking in a psycho killer bent on immortality and world conquest!
Bronze chapter 5 . 10/10/2019
I really can't say as I blame them any. Fumblemort is an old meddling fool who doesn't want to save innocent lives. He's far more interested in saving Death Eater lives than the innocent. He believes that after Harry kills Voldemort and likely dies himself that all the surviving Death Eaters will become productive citizens again and be redeemed. That's a simpletons idea. I really don't see the likes of Lucius Malfoy or Bellatrix LeStrange simply returning to not being Death Eaters. Bella's already totally insane and Malfoy's greed won't just vanish with Riddle's death. I wouldn't be surprised if the Death Eaters just continued fighting for their ideal of a magical world.
Bronze chapter 4 . 10/10/2019
This is what Fumblemort failed to do in canon for Harry. He never trained him and left him damn near no useful information about destroying the Horcruxes. Nor did he leave anything to tell Harry and his companions what they were or where to find them. In this, the Goblins are going to train both Harry and Dudley. And I'm sure if they learn where they are and what they are, they'll destroy or cleanse them depending on which they know how to do. You know, maybe if Harry and Dudley didn't attend Hogwarts for the first two years it'd scare Fumblemort into rethinking his plans. Though I dare say he'd still be planning on building a child army to fight Riddle instead of adults.
Bronze chapter 3 . 10/10/2019
How very interesting. Most stories have the Goblins knowing all about Horcruxes or Soul Leaches. But not this one. Makes for a very different story. Which I'm finding I like. and I wholeheartedly agree with keeping ol' Fumblemort totally in the dark about Harry's whereabouts.
Bronze chapter 2 . 10/10/2019
This is so gonna screw up any and all plans Fumblemort made for his control of Harry! Absolutely nothing is going to plan as of now and the future isn't looking any better either!
ak chapter 8 . 5/29/2019
bonne fic!
annamccallen chapter 8 . 4/11/2019
This was truly amazing!
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 8 . 3/17/2019
Great story really enjoyed it
heart.dramione chapter 8 . 1/8/2019
great plot! wish it was longer story-like know more of detail life on goblin island, marriage life of petunia/ sirius!
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 8 . 11/25/2018
Great story!
Esmereilda chapter 8 . 11/7/2018
that's is another awesome fic
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 8 . 7/14/2018
Nice story thank you
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