I love the story .
please continue soon
but what happen too dooku

it is wonderful.

can the future be change.

obi wan and maul will meet again.

padme is in love with anakin and padme

a interesting start

Okay, I have to say that I'm interested to know that Asajj Ventress is the mother of Boba Fett. That's...that's...wow.

could padme have a slave leia moment like in return of the jedi

I love it, I love it, I love it! This is an awesome story so far. I can't wait to see where our heroes go from here! (metaphorically, of course)

I see you used my spice freighter suggestion... nice. ;)

I think Dooku should get a first name at some point, wouldn't you say?

Also, the PM system is blocking me again. Could you fix it if you can?

Great story!

Great story, it really shows the potencial the prequels had, update soon please

This story is already off to a tremendous start, with plenty of action and character development spread throughout merely the first chapter. I truly appreciate all the effort that goes into this.

I'm guessing that Jango's partner is... Asajj Ventress?

It would be cool that if, somehow, Ben, Anakin, Padme, and Owen are halted and/or kidnapped, their alibis would include Anakin being the "navigator on a spice freighter" (I know Star Wars' "spice" are really drugs).

Maybe General Grievous could show up sometime later, being a disillusioned war hero from the Old Sith Wars who had most of his body destroyed during battle and replaced with cybernetics, serving as the foil for Anakin's transformation into the machine-Darth Vader (unless, of course, Maul is serving that purpose).

Maybe there could be a reference to Django Unchained, because both had Sam L. Jackson involved with a bounty hunter named (D)Jango. Or, maybe just the "At first you had my curiosity, but now you have my attention," line.

Great story, keep up the awesome work!

Yay sequel