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wow

It was short, but extremely fun to read. One of my new favourite ships now! As for you, keep up your wonderful work!

- Daniel Springs, remember that name.

So Jaune's father knew his son was one day gonna go off and fight grimm, and he still didn't give him any training or even unlock his Aura, Christ he claimed he thought about killing Blake just to keep his son safe, but he wont even give his own son any training what kind of shitty ass parent logic is that crap.

Shouldn't Jaune have been able to get out of his sister's headlock, he's strong and has freaking Aura for crying out loud.

Great another fic were Jaune sisters got to be hunters but not him, because that's fair.

So if Blake didn't like Jaune or even before she liked him she would have blown up at him and would have said some horrible things to him, if she found out he faked his way in, and also would have distance herself from him just to save her own skin. . . that doesn't really show Blake in the best light, if anything it makes her come of as mean and heartless.

I didn't care for the bit were Nora threaten to blackmail Jaune, that was harsh and OOC of her.

Bes story

This was such a wonderful read! I enjoy it thoroughly - you have quite a way with words and characterization. Thank you for this gem. 3

I'm not crying... it's just my allergies. I'm allergic to awesome Knightshade stories.

Very mushy and I love it for it! Thanks for writing this up!

this story is ace im not a fan of first person but this was really good

TwT HERMOSO

I loved the story; great writing, your depiction of his parents were very well done and I liked the foreshadowing provided with Maverick's semblance (great job naming btw). There is so much more that was astounding but since I'm kind of lazy, I'll just say thank you for sharing it with us.