Reviews for A god is Born
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10
Wow. You go Naruto! Show that despite Sasuke trying to kill him, take everything from him, and is still a criminal, the power of friendship prevails. Instead of calling it “talk no Jutsu”, let’s calling “suck cock no Jutsu”. Naruto would blow dick and forgive anybody. The fucking retard would probably Hitler, if it meant satisfying his bullshit. Somebody kill this dumbfuck. We don’t need more of that Ching Chong sucky sucky shit coming from his fag ass.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30
Why did you make naruto say "Ready to lose like brazil lost to Germany" he is in the elemental nations why did you make him break the fourth wall. it immediately turned me off from the story, not to mention all of the unnecessary Bold text/speech
Ben Walker1 chapter 3 . 1/6
I love the idea of using Kurama to try outlast someone in sex. gave me a great laugh.

also I was pleasantly surprised to see you gave Naruto a realistically large penis instead of the 10" that most people default to for lemons that would never bloody fit XD
WeslenBR chapter 5 . 1/3
foi bom, de fato
WeslenBR chapter 1 . 1/3
brasil... que vergonha.
Uzumaki spiral chapter 5 . 11/24/2019
Don't take my reviews seriously man, while i don't like this story that much i do love the Tenten one way more. So at least I'm not an ass troll like some flamers.
MIKE202303 chapter 5 . 7/22/2019
Damn
James1996 chapter 5 . 7/22/2019
Good chapter, I look forward to reading more in the future.
dragonfox123 chapter 5 . 7/22/2019
Interesting chapter and plot and idea
StrongGuy159 chapter 5 . 7/21/2019
Cool chapter continue please.
Spacecore94 chapter 5 . 7/21/2019
YAY THIS UPDATED
doomqwer chapter 1 . 7/20/2019
please make more
DreigoththeVampireGod chapter 1 . 6/8/2019
If you're curious dattebayo( any variations of the Uzumaki verbal tick) is loosely translated into ya'know
anthonymosca27 chapter 4 . 3/7/2019
Nice Theory but they had 1940s technology according to the creator of Naruto so any events would have to be from the 1940s the technology predates that in the first anime series the VHS tapes and TVs microwaves so that's why that's a nice Theory but only a theory not as strong as E equals MC square but close enough
Uzumaki spiral chapter 4 . 7/21/2018
So far this has been boring as hell my only major complaint is that why would you put Japanese words as the techniques without the translation NEXT to the fucking techniques but no you put it at the rock fucking bottom is it me or are you here just to infuriate a reader? Naruto and Kaguya fucking each other straight of the bat since i did not see a time skip of at least 6-8 months. Other than that i don't see major problems.
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