oh help they're adorable

I love this story

I look forward to seeing more interaction between Melody/River and Jenny, as well as Melody/River's relationship to the Doctor and Rose.

Sweet.

A sweet little one shot. Very nice.

Ok, I think by now it's no secret that I don't like River Song however this chapter and the role she has in your story has most definitely changed my opinion; at least for this story. Not to mention there's more we know of her and her background along with her relationship with her big sister. This chapter actually made me like Melody way more than I though possible and cannot wait for her appearance in the next story 3

Well damnit that was good.

Da'aaaaawwww! So cute!

really sweet this short showing a bit of river and Jenny's life

So amazing!

oddly un-fatuated? O.O

Brilliant :)

Yay, you did this :D I like it. You stayed really faithful for River's character. And I almost liked her. Almost. But making me like her is a hard task ;)

That. Was freaking. Adorable.