Oooooff! That was breathtakingly beautiful! The feels were incredible! Beautifully done.

This is sweet. I love your take on what could've been had things been different.

As a writer with a lot of experience under her belt, let me say I wouldn't have guessed this was only your second fic if you hadn't mentioned it. We all start somewhere. This was very well done and you'll only get better with practice.

This is so well written and so cute! I can't stop smiling!

Loved it! Would love to see what was going through Kurt's mind the whole time;)!

What a wonderful story! I love it :)
Please please continue with more... This is such a sweet take on what their life could of been :)

THAT IS SO CUTE OMG LET ME CRY

This is adorable! I loved it! I think you have a very original idea! I'd love to read more like this, if you decide to continue with this idea! ️

This was great! The build up was very organic and I LOVED seeing Kirt's teasing nature (that only seems to come out around Jane) how I'm sure it would have been if she had not been taken. Loved the kiss scene, and how she initiated-Kurt would hold back, wouldn't he? So as not to scare her, not to mention being riddled with guilt and doubts about, well, everything. You are such a good storyteller-I loved it! I loved the fleshing out of these two phenomenal characters. Keep writing, please, so that I can keep reading?

this was really good! don't stop

This was so good! I'm usually not a big fan of stories written in the first person (not meant as criticism, I just have a bit of OCD hahaha), so most of them time I don't read them, but boy am I happy my instincts told me to stick with it and read it anyway, because your writing is wonderful. I even forgot about the first person thing :P I loved everything about it! I often wonder what would have happened if Jane is really Taylor and hadn't been kidnapped too, and this is probably what would develop between them. I just love their connection, even if Jane ends up not being Taylor, but they have this deep connection as if their souls are two parts of a whole. Can't wait to read more of your stories :))

Lovely. I love Sarah! Great job!

Aww, I always think about what would have happened if Taylor/Jane would've had a normal childhood and how that would've affected her relationship with Kurt. This was so precious. I can't wait for the next chapter.

This " is interesting are you going to continue? Hope so its a brand new avenue to explore!