read this this week-wonderful, loved it, felt sorry for screamer though. hope you can write a sequel with him and tc in it as well as roddy. thanks for a great story!

Nice story.

I've enjoyed this fic and the one before it and I can say that a sequel would be much appreciated.

I love this story... I don't suppose, now, 8 years later, you'd come back and write another sequel? Tell us what happened too her, so we don't spend the rest of our days wondering what happens? It's torture, really. I've been thinking about this for days, and I hate to think I'll never know what happens... please? please finish it?

aw

cute

... ahem

...

... yea thats not working...

i wanna 'nother epilogue

:3

its nice

so

Optimus doesn't try the whole er... watzimikalit to become human?

eh? oh well

i wanna epilogue please!

Me like. Will there be sequal? I hope so.

Is this the last part of Tarla's story, or will there be more stories in it eventually? I liked this one, and the prequel, but I am curious to know if you'll be writing another fic in this series.

This absolutely is demanding a sequel! There's gotta be something happen between Optimus and Tarla! There's just gotta! Ya can't just run off and leave it at that... By the way, I like your site, but it could use some more Devilman stuff. - Take care and keep writting!

OH! SEQUEL! Or I shall be forced to kill cyclonis and to tear out Megatrons spark and to wring Starsreams neck. Right Boys!
*The three deceptiocons cower in fear of the human.*
*Optimis* Why are you so worked up Megatron? It is just a human.
* d's lokk at him like he is crazy* *Megatron* She Knows my mommy
*Cyclonis* She loves to kill me
Starscream* She is smarter then me
*everone starers at him* *Hot Rod wispers to Inferno* Thats not hard
*SS* Hey I resent that!
*EA strictly ignoring them* As I was saying I loved this Fic and the fic before it so pease at least one more I loce this character and you have a wonderfull sense of humor. My bro. started yeling at me to stop giggling. Please help me annoy him! Elven Archer

Hey there Kamara/Stealthbunny!

I just spent 1 whole day reading this fic and its sequel, than re-reading it again and again and again...you get my point : )

My gosh! I demand to ask why you have been hiding this fic away? I say that because it has taken me a long time to find a fic as excellent calibre as this and I just happen to fall into it while just trying to find a fic (it's the vacations and near the midle of the night...)

The writing is exceptional (is this your first one)-as if I was reading words written from an experienced, insightful and thoughtful professional writer. And boy, talking about how you arrange the words-the emotions! Amazing, how you just capture them, bringing such life to the characters and how spot on you were. They entrance the reader into this amazing world where you largely had an OC character and that is tough one for me to get interested into, let me tell you. What I took away from this story was the amazing character of Tarla-so complicated and complex like we all are trying to figure everything out in a complicated wold of boundaries. And another thing that is still tingling in my mind is to see a final, stable ending to Tarla's path. In the second fic it was still a little ominous what she decides to do. And one puzzling question-in the 1st fic she had heard eveything about the meeting, so should she not have an idea of seaspray lake which in the sequel she said she did not know of?

Just one little nitpick, otherwise it was a brilliant fic and I know that my feedback does not truly reflect or hold the eloquence of the words that come into my mind on how much I enjoyed and loved the fic. All I can really say is THANK YOU, THANK YOU, for being such a wonderful ARTIST and WRITER in taking time to write these 2 wonderful fics and hope you finish off the series with one more complete ending. All I wish I could do was to get everybody to read it-it is a must.

Keep up the brilliant work, star writer.

After reading both this story and it's prequil I have be a true fan of your work. I know it's been over two years since you did anything with seris, but I really really really REALLY want you write another one. I have to find out what happens to Tarla. This story ends with WAY too supence about her future.

I just spent the last two days of my time, weather it was free or not, reading the prequil to this. And right now I have this whole gut-renching emotion-ey feeling inside form this story. It just captivated me so much. I know you wrote this over two years ago, but if you still check reviews, I have to say that this the *best* fanfic I have ever read.

Aiyaa! You wrote a sequel! *grins* I love it as much as the first story! PLEASE, write another sequel, and continue this story I wanna see Tarla and Optimus ACTUALLY get together, and STAY together! Come on you know you want to...

I love your stories! They're nice and long _ But I really wish you could've wrote about Optimus being a human. That'd be so cool )

I can't believe I forgot to review this. Here goes.

At first I didn't think so much of the Tarla stories. But for some reason I found myself going over them repeatedly, being especially drawn to the odd friendship between Tarla and Starscream. The story seemed to grow on me and I found myself liking them, so much so that I'm now wondering...

Is there any hope for another sequel?

(Thinking) Perhaps she can be tempted with lots and lots of Energon...