lol. this is awesome

i hope his sword can create a cresent moon shaped arc of energy which could be sent towards the opponent like a gallade using psycho cut

I have seen that you ask for comment quite a lot. I can understand that, but I, at the least, I am one of those that read all that is presenta then rewiew. Dont worry, at this moment the story is quite entertaining, like, what Ichika would be if he wasnt as dense as a Block of concrete. And well, maybe too Op in the inteligence /smooth department, but I knew what I was getting into

the fact your not complaining about the fourth wall being broken makes this better

So nobody bother to correct the Cecelia spelling? As her fan and a victim of name nassacre myself this is kind of sad

I'm with Bismarck on this, there should have been a huge lemon with all the girls... Even the ones he wasn't about to marry...

What a terrible fucking story, it's so shallow and contrived, whatever mediocre plot there supposedly is gets drowned out by awkward sex scenes and poor writing. Every character is essentially identical in personality with the exception of Chifuyu, making any of the girls completely interchangeable with the others.

Ok I just read the last chapter can you please tell me what happened to Rin.

This has been a fun fanfic and im actually gonna miss this universes Ichika cause hes not as dense as a blackhole, and I love the ending man keep up the good onto business can you PLEASE make a Hybrid x heart fanfic for me and make the mc a little bit like Orimu but WAY more .

He is your sex friend not lover

good story bro 9/10

Nice Story mate. It was a fun read the lemons could've been a bit more in detail and better but they were still enjoyable and honestly writing in depth lemons are hard in a harem of this size I believe you handled it nicely. The way Ichika was in this is sort of what I wish the cannon would be like maybe not the whole playboy style but I did enjoy his personality. All in all a great story thanks for writing it.

SA18

Sorry to see the story end, it was a fun story to read and all. Though I'm curious on what happened to Rin and Kanzaki. I'm surprised they didn't end up getting married to Ichika as well, but good luck in your future endeavors.

Great story but minus points for rushed or lazy ending. Would've liked to see a final major lemon scene with the girls or impregnating Houki. But its your story.

This was an amazing story!