| Reviews for When You Cross a Line |
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2018 Great fic! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2016 Make another it was awesome |
aliqueen16 chapter 1 . 12/5/2015 I apologize for the rant about to come, but I just HAVE to say this. A-MA-ZING! This just hands-down shows the unbreakable bond between them. I love how you put a little bit of every ship too, to please all audiences. And the boys were on point. And, like, could you send me a link through which I can personally land Ryan and his goons in the hospital? And how you made the seemingly unthreatening Riley and Farkle react, ESPECIALLY Riley, was amazing! And, despite her bubbly, naïve, happy-go-lucky personality, I believe that in an opportune moment such as this, the shark inside of her would emerge. And the throwback to the shuddering was so well placed! Do you think Ryan and/or his goons would mess with them after this? Like, in a following chapter? Keep on keepin' on, and please continue this truly amazing and inspiring story. I've been bullied and had friends and family stick up for me, so I appreciate your angle on this. Plus vulnerable Maya is always an interesting angle. Not that I like to see her sad, but,just as Mr. Perfect had a Texas Lucas under wraps, it's nice to see the many layers of one complex character. Thanks again, aliqueen16 |
LayaxFiley122 chapter 1 . 11/20/2015 Dammmmnnnn Riley! That part was the best! At first I would read 'Riley glared' in a fanfiction and I wouldn't be able to picture it, but after Belief when Lucas makes the comment about her and Maya being too close and she glares at him I could see it and it was perfect! No one should mess with Lucas' girl and her best friends! That Ryan dude had it coming! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2015 perfect |
LycoX chapter 1 . 11/20/2015 A big Hell Yeah on this! Great work here! Especially with Riley going in like that! |
CriminalOutsider'sGirl14 chapter 1 . 11/19/2015 I didn't like it. I loved it! You are such an amazing writer, and I loved the set-up of this fic. Please write more stories soon. |