Reviews for The Banished Hero
TheDude chapter 17 . 7/22/2018
Nice
angelcarstairs4679 chapter 17 . 7/21/2018
Cool story, although I think the reason Percy got the message was that his mum was pregnant, not that he cheated on Annabeth... oh man he going to the dark side, brrr. Spooky but cool.
ShreyPendragon chapter 16 . 7/17/2018
continue updating
ShreyPendragon chapter 17 . 7/17/2018
However as far as i could understand..the chaoter was awesone
ShreyPendragon chapter 17 . 7/17/2018
bro chapter 17 is present in the codes format...try to post it again
Red the Pokemon Master chapter 17 . 7/17/2018
Can you fix the chapter? It's illegible.
jhon young chapter 1 . 6/6/2018
you need to finish oterwise ,so far so good , ar they going to have sex?
Dumb chapter 16 . 4/16/2018
Hmm Nice
Red the Pokemon Master chapter 16 . 4/16/2018
I agree with SpartanBoy, please let there be the Pertemis pairing, but don't have him bend over to her every single command. And please don't make her out as a man hater, she just dislikes and tolerates men.
cypher144 chapter 16 . 4/14/2018
More please so good hopefully you'll upadeate faster
SpartanBoi chapter 16 . 4/14/2018
Hmm... I like this but I think you should make Percy a loner, if he romances someone then it kind of ruins the whole badass affect. Or maybe he should romance Artemis but please please don't make him bend over to serve her every need, to many stories are like that. Also please don't make the romance to quick, she is a goddess who hates males after all.
StaticAmo chapter 14 . 2/14/2018
Come on don't give up you come this far for nothing?
Noel chapter 15 . 2/7/2018
Great story this far and good job! Don’t quit this story as it’s great already. I’m exited to see what’s coming up next and hope you can keep doing the chapters! Cheers
Guest chapter 15 . 2/6/2018
Good to see you came back to the story :) Keep up the good work!
StaticAmo chapter 15 . 2/6/2018
Please make them longer. I ready ur chapters in a few minutes
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