*Sob*
Beautiful. I love your work.

[PS The name is what happens when a book worm enters the chrysalis (library) and emerges as a higher literature-eating form.]

I don't see why people should criticize the choice of the name Harianna - I think it's unique and much better than names which have no relation to Fem!Harry - you can say that there's a flower naming tradition in the Evans female line, and you can maybe stretch that they use Black naming traditions and name her after a star if you try, but it's /tons/ more imaginative than always using Harriet and you had good reasons! I never even knew that was a name!

I was always partial to Ariana myself, as a non-related name which she /could/ insist people call her Harry from - especially when reborn into another world as the DoM. I read this great fem!HP fanfic called "Game On!" and in the sequel, she's reborn into Amestris - Fullmetal Alchemist fandom - as a hero's assistant to make sure the death count is lowered and the hardships aren't so trying. Her name is Ariana there and I thought it suited her.

I love poor Draco trying to escape his relentless, superiorly Slytherin, parents.

I LOVED IT! IT WAS BEAUTIFUL! YASSSSSSSS

This is only the first chapter, and already it's such a mess. You mix up past and present tense, third person and first person, try to jam three or four sentences into one, miss apostrophes, commas, etc.

You say in your AN that you had a beta reader for this story, but they clearly haven't been doing their job. I was hoping for a good fem!Harry story, as they are extremely rare, but I'll have to look further.

But that's good, right?

Please add epilogue to this fiction as you said in the biography i will wait for it, it is good work Thank you.

This story is great one . Please write part 2 of this story

Interesting first chap

I loved it... to be honest I was waiting for more... Not ofense, it was wonderful, and I really enjoy it until the end... (but yep, I'm waiting for a lot of updates so I want more and more LOL) but I was not ready for the end... xD but whatever... I loved it... Kudos!

Loved it

Oh really? Finished? I'm chocked. I'm shocked because this is the end for me and would not end ever. How I wish to see the marriage and their babies. *-*
Thank you for the amazing story.

When I read your summary the first thing I wanted to do is congratulate you on choosing fem harry's name but refrained from doing so... and then I read people flame you because of that. Ridiculous! Harriet is an awful name and overly used for fem Harry and other choices were equally gross (or nuts like some Caliopopea or other crap). Harianna sounds cool and I haven't seen that one before so kudos to you.

Ahhh so sweet...

Muy bueno.

ooo lovely ending yet I kind of wish for one more chapter into the future about just maybe the wedding and then kids but still good ending :)