Reviews for The Captive of The Memory
LW12 chapter 1 . 3/16
Very good
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2018
Yo can you mack another chapter please and thank you .
The pizza guy chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
The chief of staff part made me laugh!
jasongd chapter 1 . 1/31/2017
Very good and hoot Story congratulation
Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2016
I really like this one. Make another chapter pls
Clodd Howard chapter 1 . 8/28/2016
Please Continue this story, It's really good!
Cri Fenti chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
Okay... This seriously needs to have a sequel. This was really good and the writing is amazing
Drunken Hamster chapter 1 . 5/23/2016
Enjoyed it. Thanks for the read. Kinda cringy as kids, but what can you expect? They were kids, haha.

~Drunk
Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2016
Super awesome, can't wait for more
WestShoreGent chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
Please continue, don't let this die. You're the only hope and one with a well developed and written story of steven universe.
gamabrony chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
Really nice story, very interesting
Shooting Star Ships chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
Good job
Going to read the sequel right now!
;)
wakasta chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
this was good
Galaxy Knight chapter 1 . 11/15/2015
I hope you do a sequal, this was really entertaining and well written.
ShadowMark3 chapter 1 . 11/15/2015
Are you going to continue this? I'm looking forward to see how this turns out.
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