so sad! *sniffles* but great _

Omg, i really really liked that...

My poor Jowy bear...

I loved that! keep it up

Poor, poor Suikoden kids!

"Masato... do you ever wish that time could have gone on forever?"

Wow... two separate levels of meaning.

Aaaaaaannnggssst!

Wow, wonderful, wonderful. Very real, thinking over painful things no one wants to think about, the dreaming that he knows can never come true. Ooh, I like. And I thought Masato wouldn't come. Heh.

Though this scene is commonly done for fanfiction, I have to admit you've done a good job describing the scene. Jowy's pain is quite evident throughout the story, and I really like the final line of it. :)

I glompeth thee.

(How about posting Dancing Barefoot in the Rain?)

Wow! That was wonderful! Keep up the great work!

really liked this! nice way to show Jowy's side, which I feel is harder than the other guy's point of view. Good job and keep writing!

I love how you executed this short but sweet angst filled fic, and how you captured Jowys fleeting thoughts. Most people write it as if he were so calm, but you put in the little panic that made it seem so real. I really enjoyed the fic!