I really like the idea of the story, so please update soon.
Also, not to sound rude, but Kyo's mother died by throwing herself in a path of a train.
I can't wait to see where this story goes. :)

I hope you continue this! It sounds really interesting. :3

Oh my lord of muffins...PLEASE CONTINUE! this story has so much potential and I really enjoyed your writing style! Please continue this when you can! ;)

I'd be interested in a second chapter

Wow, I wasn't expecting it to be about Kyo and Kyoko. When I read the summary, I thought for sure it would be about a dialogue of Tohru and Kyoko. I really liked how you switched the point of view, and don't worry you made it easy to follow. I would be interested in knowing more, but it's entirely up to you :)

This seems very interesting so far!

Finally reading this! Sorry it took so long! It's definitely a cute chapter, but if I had one critique it would be that the story right now doesn't really feel like it's actually going anywhere. I'm sure that'll turn around if you decide to continue (which you totally should!) and more of a plot develops. And I really want to see how Tohru and Kyou get along since they met in such different circumstances. So, I'd love to see you continue, but no pressure! I love how you've been writing more recently. :)

Good two chapters

Hey there! I think you have I great story idea! so keep up the good work!

There is no reason for you not to update. This was so good, I can't even. Gimme More!

So glad you're writing again! If I can make just a slight note about formatting, the chapter seems abrupt when you start the story and again when you end it because there's no clear distinction between where the story starts/stops and where you as an author are speaking. Since you can get the nice long horizontal lines to work (they didn't used to work on FFN -_- ), you could put those in between the story and the author notes.

Aside from that, I'm surprised at how well your writing flows! It's been so long since I've read anything you've written that I either forgot or maybe your writing has gotten better since I last saw it, but it's beautiful. )

I know I, personally, would love to see where this story goes or how it could continue, but if you want to write something else, that's cool? But you definitely need to keep writing!