Reviews for Pick Up The Pieces
Kaye Koch chapter 6 . 11/13/2019
Are you adding to this story? It is good
ninaFelton1967 chapter 3 . 9/14/2019
i am a little confused by this chapter. up until the court hearing Harry is not dating. but in the testimony he started Dating Draco 4 months after the Divorce?
ninaFelton1967 chapter 1 . 9/14/2019
Great first chapter. I love where its going. Its ok that its OOC. It's your story. And you are right. he about Fred :)
Anna Doherty chapter 6 . 11/12/2018
Damn but that was one of the best stories I have read in a long time can’t wait to read more of your stories. Anna
roon0 chapter 6 . 2/10/2018
too right!
roon0 chapter 5 . 2/10/2018
Lovely chapter.
roon0 chapter 4 . 2/10/2018
Cute end to the chapter. Molly, Ron and Ginny deserved their fate.
roon0 chapter 3 . 2/10/2018
Dear me!
roon0 chapter 2 . 2/10/2018
Wow Harry in prison, not good.
roon0 chapter 1 . 2/10/2018
I love it.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/13/2017
If I feel your story is crap, I'm allowed to tell you, especially since I did give valid reasons. Your nicknames are just goofy (and not in a good way), your story telling need major work since you do more telling than showing, and the sex scene was so awkward that I cringed (more goofy nicknames!). So I am perfectly entitled to tell you why I think your story is not good.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/13/2017
This is way too cheesy. Are you still in high school? Because it shows. Just...no. Worst slash with Drarry I've ever read. Sorry (not sorry) but it is and you should know it.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/13/2017
I really hate those nicknames. Did you really need to give EVERYONE a nickname? They're stupid sounding and just downright goofy and unnecessary. Stop it.
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 5 . 8/7/2017
To confirm, yeah, I've read this before. I liked the storyline for the most part, but there were scenes that were just not very believable or just like way out there. It was a nice story overall though.
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 1 . 8/7/2017
This first chapter seems familiar, so I think I have read this before, but I must not have reviewed it. I can't remember if I liked it, so I'll read it again.
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