Looking forward to reading more!

This is an interesting story.

it is amazing how snape is the only one who comes up with a summoning charm, basicly the first thought i had.

your writing is really good, albeit far to eleborate for my liking but this story is so full of plot holes, many from you forcing a plot

what is the big deal about being an animagus they treat it like he killed someome and is going to get a dementors kiss for it.

a second year with a book that a bone breaker curse entrail expelling curse... right dark magic is natural for a second year

this curse of zabini is such bullshit. it obliviates, kills babies, entrals men, entrals the women who is cursed.
that is some massively overpowered curse, hell it makes the werewolf curse seem pleasent.

i doubt such a thing is possible without a ritual or willingly given blood. just imagne a curse that changes the very nature of a person turning them into some form of demented veela with half a dozen side effects

there is no way i can see this as plausible

there is just so much wrong with having your growth of your magic tied to your animagus form and how it is correcting itself it is almost as unlikely as a 15 month old child having an inner animal to represent his character and accidently changing into it without losing his mind.
i could go on and on about why this is wrong but i doubt this crossed your mind so i'll just try to ignore it

you go in such detail about the most inane things but you forget to adjust them to the world of magic and thus creatr a whole lot of inconsistencies. like bacon from a plastic wrapper, what magical knows plastic? and no it didnt come from the muggle world as he owl ordered it.

the books never details these kinds of things but the truth is the magical world is to small both in land and population to sufficiantly produce everything. so for all their hate of muggles it is likely they get most of their supplies from them

the story is very very long winded

his reaction to hermione couldnt be a more fake setup nothing about it makes sense nor is it done with any natural subtelty

you do realize snakes are coldblooded right?

I love this story! I love the little nuances of human culture in general that Harry is having a hard time with. Also I love your Rita and her backstory; it's not common to have a decent Rita.

I look forward to the next chapter whenever that may be~

Sans aucun doute, une histoire adorable. J'aime beaucoup l'originalité de cette fiction qui ne ressemble définitivement pas à aucune autre. J'espère que tu poursuivras dans ce sens... Salutations de France ;)

I think I remember something about Ginny writing about paint on her robes...

LOVE the Hufflepuff-Harry thing!
I was sorted into Hufflepuff back when Pottermore was still fun...