i FREAKING LOVED THIS

REALLY LIKED THIS!

AWESOME! GO DIPCIFICA. THIS SHOULD HAVE BEEN THE ACTUAL EPISODE INSTEAD.

welcome to every man's worst nightmare Dipper.

I'm Sorry,

sans, Gideon and Bill.

S A N S, Gideon and Bill.

S A N S.

Yeah, that font gives me a bad time.

Thank you for writing this fanfic! When the actual episode first started and people where telling Dipper to find someone else and move on I was like "Umm... PACIFICA?" And was disappointed when I saw she didn't come in the episode. Ever since, I was wondering what could've happened if she did and this fic responded to those needs! Thanks!
Loved the story!

I read Chapter 10 an yo need to have more this was so good i need more

This was one of the most important thing I have ever heard and i think that you can make more like this

I must say that I love this story. This is a good explanation of how Preston decides to punish his daughter. Even though she did the right thing. Yet, a good story of how Pacifica shows feelings towards Dipper throughout the story, merged into the episode. Especially how Soos finds his way out of the maze, lol. Not only that, but it shows Dipper's love towards Pacifica when he blocks the human spider. As well as how deep Pacifica sees her fear of losing Dipper to Wendy. Even though Wendy turns him down easy. I also love it of how Stan sees his own fear.

Being his father and brother confront him in his mind and he thinks it's real. Pretty deep. That's why I love the fountain part. The diner part was really good as well. Just wish it could've went a little further. But, eh, it's a tease to their feelings for each other. It's also been confirmed for this pairing when you listen to the commentary on the DVDs. Gotta get back to my own work now, or I'll just procrastinate more, lol. Till next time.

TimPrime1 out

Dude, this is REALLY cool!

I love this so much!

I actually thought that this episode was trying too hard to put in Character development with Dipper and Stan, and I always though it was a missed opportunity to not have Pacifica in the Episode to interact with Dipper and Mable... Mostly Dipper. :3

I can't wait to see where this goes.

Update soon.

I will admit. I got into Dipcifica a few weeks ago and this is a great story. True it could've went on after 10, but it's a good ending. Just recently began a Gravity Falls fanfiction myself and plan to go as far as I can. Loved how this story resembled the episode. Just wish they could've done this, but teased their relationship more. That or it took up too much time. You could go to another episode like this one, have her parents figuring out what went on. Them forbidding their daughter to date him and such. A lot of ideas. Till next time.

TimPrime1 out

Awww, this was really cute.

nice chapter.

I liked this story, it was very interestingly done from Pacifica's POV for someone from the outside. But I really like how you did Soos in this story, not dim or childlike, but he was smart and observant enough as well.

The show fucked up by ending so soon, it made it feel abrupt and rushed, so don’t copy the show in that sense. I suppose this story can end here though without seeming strangely sudden.