| Reviews for KOTOR: The Beginning |
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Spartan-A312 chapter 8 . 3/5 PLEASE FRIGGIN RECONTINUE THIS AWESOME STORY! |
masterdude94 chapter 8 . 10/30/2017 Wow this is a really good story! I really hope you get over your writers block, because you have done such a good job with this. The ONLY criticism I have is that you could use a Beta/Proofreader. There are several severe typos and grammar and spelling errors, which again, could be fixed by a Beta or Proofreader. Again, I really hope you continue this soon! It is a great KotOR SI! |
Dazac chapter 1 . 4/20/2017 I'm guessing English isn't your first language... |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2017 Shitty grammar is shitty. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2017 The fact that you couldn't be bothered to type the letter "I" annoyed me. This story isn't worth my irritation over your numerous grammatical mistakes. |
A Revanchist chapter 1 . 6/5/2016 This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. You added enough new elements to make a story that I'm very familiar with new and exciting again. I've noticed only a handful of spelling mistakes or missed words, like when you are trying to say "I am" or something similar. I particularly enjoyed your focus on the mandalorians and their culture and I too share an appreciation for them. Overall this is an excellent story and I eagerly await more. |
Sky Hooves chapter 8 . 5/28/2016 That's an AWESOME story you write there. I totally love all the details you put in it, with the language and culture about not only the Mandalorian but other species as well. I really hope there will be another chapter soon. I would love to see the Wookies taking their home back. |
A Revanchist chapter 8 . 4/4/2016 I have to be honest, I FREAKIN LOVE THIS STORY! I'm a huge fan of the Mandalorian culture as well and this is a story the likes of which I have wanted for a very long time! I noticed the post you made yesterday about that story you were co-writing and I think that what that guy did was just terrible. As for this story, don't give up! I realize that I am saying this out of not-so-altruistic reasoning but you have something really great going here! I've tried my hand at writing a couple of times on here and I have hit a similar road block of not knowing how to continue past the middle stuff to get to the parts I really want to write about. All I can say is don't give up like I did. I really want to see more of Wade and Mesh'la as well as the eventual reveal of Revan and what changes that can cause with Wade there, maybe he can get frozen in carbonite with Mesh'la and Canderous and be awakened in the SWTOR era to lead the Mandalorians away from the Sith? Just food for thought! Keep up the good work and I eagerly await the next update! |
Guest chapter 9 . 4/4/2016 Sorry to hear that happens to you. I used to read that series before the self-inserts multi crossover makes me cringe too much from reading it. Self-inserts act a little too self justified and arrogant to me sometimes. But yours act reasonably in many situations and I applaud you for it. What happened in the latest gundam story chapter that offended was probably not intentional in offending you. |
TheMadTargaryen chapter 8 . 3/4/2016 Hey glad to see you posted a new chapter. It was a really good read. |
War Sage chapter 8 . 3/3/2016 Great chapter |
Squadpunk 2.0 chapter 8 . 2/29/2016 Been a while, but I'll wait for the next chapter patiently, can already imagine the carnage in the next chapter... |
Hankinus chapter 8 . 2/29/2016 Glad to see that you have updated the story! I really enjoyed the new chapter. There were a several grammatical errors I seen but with how long each chapter is I think it is ok with those errors because I bet it would be a pain in the but to find all of the errors. But I really enjoy the story and hope you keep with it! |
Hector Flores chapter 8 . 2/29/2016 Glad to see you updated the story. Kind off looking forward to see Mesh'la and Wade one day admitting they love each other. |
Hankinus chapter 7 . 2/28/2016 I'm really enjoying the story! It is my favorite KOTOR fanfic so far I hope you continue it! |