I don't mean to be rude, but it appears that this is a duplicate of the previous chapter. Is there a reason for this by any chance.

I think this is the best invader zim story I've ever read. It took me nearly three days to read it all but it was so worth it! I really hope you continue it (:

Was good

Oh man.. I saw the update and thought: Finally the next chapter.. But all my hopes where broken when I read that you where correctin the grammar.
I am not the best person to talk about grammar but I didn't notice big mistakes in the writing so far and if I saw something it didn't bothered so I wouldn't complain if you just leave it like that...
Well, but I think that I will need to be patience until late you decides to continue. You have my respect for correcting your own mistakes :3

aww the the ending give me the

This has been rather fascinating. I just found it and read the whole thing in one go. I am actually rather picky with what authors do so I'm impressed a bit that I don't have as much criticism as I would for a much shorter story. Considering the length and size so far, I am rather pleased so far and hope you decide to continue this story. Other than a few spelling/grammatical errors, the rest is opinion based so good work. You're doing lovely.

I find it all fascinating and I have to say Ray and Keef are adorable together and it would be fun to see more there. I loved Girlfriend sneaking in with a flower and thought it would be funny to see Ray's reaction when he finds out it was from the crazed robot. Not to mention the adorableness of Girls giving Key a cookie and Key admitting he liked his company. You do well including the robots as in most fics they only pop up when convenient and the rest of the time they just disappear.

One thing I've been waiting for though that was hinted at earlier is the Purple/Zim bonding over their babies and really getting to know each other. I think it's adorable when they get together and chirp due to being overly excitably happy. Purple is hilarious and cute in here and when put with Zim it's basically a good overload.

Keep up the good work.
~Envy.

P.s. So totally want to see the Tallests first time out on the town. I bet it's hysterical. _

I missed Yooyuuu sooo much I acept your apology!

this the only site i know that can translate Language's.

#auto/en/s

fabric I mean

it is a great fabric but it feels like it's been slowing down on the updates

The poor traumatized Virtual and Irkens! My cheeks are so red.

1: ZIM PLEASE STOP! *cries an ocean*
2: Computer...computer...bro...GIVE TWEEKY A HUG! *hugs the computer*

I'M NOT CRYING YOUR CRYING! This moment is so GAH I can't even explain it!

Computer and Gir ship it!