| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Stay at St Mungo's |
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draconin chapter 2 . 8/16 What a great story! I love temporal stories that are complex but internally logical. If you've not already read it, see Robert Heinlein's short story "All You Zombies". |
stevem1 chapter 2 . 7/31 This is a nice story. And Wizarding Britain is still pathetic. |
BiGDeal chapter 1 . 7/25 Definitely a different story and one well worth reading. Going to have to read through the others, but already have too many other writers to read as well. |
Love2read23 chapter 2 . 4/27 Oh my gosh! I love it! I love that Luna's mom was saved. I can't tell if Harry actually time traveldd to give Neville's best man speech. I'm sad that they didn't tell Neville Rolf was Harry so that Neville could do the same thing and stand in as Rolf's best man for Harry. I'm really really glad that Rolf is Harry and that Harry and Luna are still together. Although I don't understand the order of the Harry's and Rolfs at the wedding. Harry disguised as Rolf marries Harry then goes back in time and attends the wedding as Harry then leaves early to sitting in the train so he's sitting there when Rolf/Harry brings Luna to him. Oh that wasn't so hard. Cool. It seems that Harry has gotten used to using time travel alot. That could have a lot of consequences but it seems like it's working out for them. I'm so happy Harry's okay and that Luna's alive. I'm just sad that Sirius couldn't be saved. Dumbledore wasn't there yet so just Moody and maybe Moody wasn't in that room. Anway, Thank you thank you thank you for writing this! |
Love2read23 chapter 1 . 4/27 Wow! This is amazing. Being your first fic just makes it that much mire amazing. It was sad that Harry was tortured and in St. Mungo's for so long, that only Neville visited. I thought that Harry might be writing with magic though I didn't make the connection that that meant Luna can see magic. I love their conversations and I can't wait for that part about the e creatures and her parents. I'm guessing there's 3 Harry's one at 3 years in future, one at 7, and one at 13. I hope that Harry doesn't get in trouble for what he said about Harry Potter casting the curses but not him. |
Traveler301 chapter 2 . 2/7 This has got to be one of the most fun fascinating stories I've ever read. Chapter two was easier to work out than chapter one but, diffidently a really, really well thought out story plot to try to stay ahead of successfully. Thanks again for the great story, Ron Pate Traveler301 |
Traveler301 chapter 1 . 2/7 WOW! What a ride! I'm not sure my old brain understood everything as you wrote it but, it has been one heck of a good story. Usually, when I think that I've figured out has happened in a story, I later find that I had no clue as to the author was thinking or what he or she was going to have their characters do next. This time and in this story, I have no clue, and that makes me happy. I can't wait to read chapter two. Thanks, Ron Pate Traveler301 |
BlazeVein chapter 2 . 2/4 woa, nice crack fic. I love this couple :) |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/1 Good story. |
Fyrebird85 chapter 2 . 10/30/2019 I liked the story very much, but this epilogue is killing me. I'm sure you thought it was cute, but jumping back and forth in time is a cheap gimmick that does not enhance the story. Frankly, it's not worth it to wade through it all to try to make sense of it. |
gabzep chapter 2 . 10/20/2019 Oh thank god Rolf was actually Harry. I shed some tears when I thought they had broken up. Loved it poor Neville |
Rainbow Prime chapter 2 . 6/26/2019 So...Harry ended up with Luna, then? Good. I won't have to sue for false advertising then. |
a flower in the sun chapter 1 . 6/16/2019 Great story, no amazing story regardless of the unecessary Ron bashing |
sam chapter 2 . 11/24/2018 Awesome story. It was mad, insane and totally impossible to guess. |
sunsethill chapter 2 . 10/22/2018 I'm so glad you added this chapter to the story. The first chapter was amazing, absolutely amazing. It can stand on it's own, but I do like the additional closure this chapter adds. You did a great job keeping us guessing, but not letting us get too upset as the reveal was happening. Keeping Neville in the dark was a good device, but, yes, he is going to be narked. You do such a good job of thinking through possible problems and issues and dealing with them, while being creative and doing things I really haven't seen done before. I do wonder why Harry's amazing ability with arithmancy didn't make an appearance in the second chapter? I guess I'm just a nerd for faux magical theory. I plan to reread this one soon. |