if the pack knows everything jake knows. didn't they see bella slowly pulling away from jake as their connection faded? if i had a first hand perspective of their inevitable breakup and felt the guilt and depression jake was going through it wouldn't make sense for me to ostracise him. the pack choosing bellas side doesn't make sense.

bella honestly sucks because she admitted that she would pick edward over jake anyday even whilst dating jacob and the pack still picks her side?

good story. love the writing! never felt so invested in a side character. teamjake

A great story but please learn when the difference between your and you're.

Oooh boy I am loving this. There a few minor areas where the writing drops but overall it is a solid piece of fiction. Keep up the good work.

I am loving it so far. Despite the volume of the fics, there are far too few Twifics that are worth the read beyond the first chapter.

You're doing good. Now bring on the pain! Bring on the healing! And an escape attempt?

I am intrigued and thank you so much for writing in 3rd POV. It warms my heart. :)

So much is coming to a head. I can't wait to see what happens next!

At first, I was worried she was gonna loath her New Life, but it was so far so good. Please update soon.

I can't wait for next chapter.

I Hope Edward finds her soon. Poor thing Bella.

I didn't expect this outcome. I hope the wolves accept help from the vampires.

It was a shame they didn't catch him. I loved Edward making progress with Bella.

I'm intrigued and I have a clue about what happened.

Omg, that was really Hot and sexy. Seeing Edward more relaxed about the idea of having sex is delightful.

I loved that this chapter was about the two of them. Talking and making uP things.

I bet the conversación between them must be very interesting.