How awesome would it be for all the gang to enter an competition

Eevee would be one cool Espeon. Your story is awesome! I wonder how Gary will confess?

I would absolutely love for Meowth to join Ash"s team. I wonder what will sway him to join the Dark Side?

I think it would be really awesome to see what a breeding competition would be like!

No, Brock needs ta study more

yes, GO MEOWTH!

(Meowth, THAT'S RIGHT!)

Loved this story, thanks for writing!

Oh my gosh! I so like this story!

Is ash going to get a riolu or lucario in the next few chapters

I truly enjoyed you're attention to details that'd normally be skipped over and were definitely ignored and skipped over during the anime. I enjoyed your take on the relationships and sense of humor as well. I'm sad it stopped 3 years ago but I don't regret reading what I have :D

This is awesome! Keep it up!

Hey if you are still active on this site I beseech you to update this fantastic fanfic!

I think this is a good story so far, however Swift Seim and static are abilities. It would make more sense for Ash to teach Pikachu thunder wave, as it does the same as your using static for and its an actual move. Then Golden could know rain dance to activate swift swim. If you want them to be moves, please include a list of abilities turned into moves. I like Misty with buttetfree
And why not include tafe? Ash could do it whenever she wanted, and she could do an online course, short course, and there could be something to help Brock too. It would make more sense then Ash going to uni.
And can she please catch a Swablu? It would be good if she or Misty caught the water starter of sun and moon, as it's my favourite. Also, chinchou is a johto pokemon, not hoenn. Good job so far though!

Liked the chapter. It is good.

I can't wait for the next update. Best Pokemon story I've read in awhile.