J'avais adoré cette histoire quand je l'avais suivie chapitre par chapitre, et je ne regrette pas mon envie de la relire 3 ans plus tard. Le plot twist de fin et la psychologie des personnages (autant Trunks que Vegeta ou Bulla qui sont d'ailleurs des persos que j'affectionnent énormément) restent à mes yeux l'un des meilleurs moyens d'appréhender la famille Briefs. Encore bravo pour ce chef d'oeuvre

Très bonne histoire, sans doute une des meilleures que j’ai lue depuis un bail (et par histoire je pas « fanfiction » : elle a ça place dans quelle librairie).
est extrêmement bien menée : il y a juste ce qu il faut , le rythme est intense. Je suis contente eu accès à la version complète et ne pas avoir eu à attendre les updates (je serai rongé les ongles )
Le climat familial que tu décris est justesse hallucinante. La profondeur des personnages, leurs interactions face à la problématique, ... tout est magnifique.

Je fais u e pause dans ma lecture de cette histoire qui échappée.
Au début j’ai trouvé l’ambiance malaisante, elle m’a fait penser à Mister Babadock.
Maintenant que j’en arrive au milieu, je refreine mon envie d’aller lire le dernier chapitre pour calmer toute cette tension que je ressens. Je trouve ton interprétation des parents de Bulla plus que crédible (le déni de Bulma qui finit par consulter notamment et qui claque limite des doigts pour que le problème soit résolu !)
J’aime ton Trunks aussi, hyper questionnant !

This story was great. I couldn't put it down. You had me second guessing the whole time.

Vegeta do give a damn.. And damn, this story is marvelous in every aspect. Suspense, drama, every chapter is a whole lotta "Wows" and "Oh shi.. I enjoyed it very much. It was epic!

Wow! For many chapters this story was very disturbing. I even only kept reading because I found myself interested in what questions trunks would ask vegeta during training and what vegeta would answer. I also wanted to understand what was making it all so disturbing because I felt very uneasy. But in the previous chapter where vegeta solved the mistery, it was truly genius of you to come up with all that story, I am impressed. Everything made sense and was well planned. Good work!

Wow, awesome story! So full of suspense, I was on edge every time something happened. Wonderful depiction of a detached and introvert Vegeta, yet you still could feel the love he has for his family, it was always there, he's just different in his own saiyan way. It was great to get inside his mind and his points of view and his comparisons between earthlings and saiyans.

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What n amazing twist! Trunks and Vegeta these two are just never easy but I'm glad they have finally dealt with something together! Papa Vegta is always the best

I just spent three days reading this off and on and wow! What a way to show us that sometimes the real "beast" is sometimes inside us. Great story! Totally awesome!

God this was such a great unique story. You really made me think about what it means to be Saiyan on Earth, no wishful frills. Total psychological thriller turned straight up character study.
Excellent job, one for my favorites list for sure! Thanks for your efforts to write this in English. I hope to see more stories from you in English but I understand if you won't write a story this way again.

I finished this in school, and it was amazing. I loved your portrait of the characters its very cannon, one the most canon ive ever seen about this family. Im sorry about Trunks, he was spoiled but he seemed like a good kid in GT. But many people dont count GT so I guess its the case. Anyway, Im going to go see your profile and check if you have anything else. Also, im going to Rec this in Tumblr, because fanfiction needs more attention- theres so little of this fandom. that good things should be shared.

Omg, Im scared!, its the jabberwocky a evil ghost?!, I have school tomorrow and all I want is to stay a finish this. But I probably will take my laptop with me and pretend im doing my collegue work. While am actually just reading. I love your fanfic is awesome

I really liked this story. Wonderfully written.

One of the most incisive, most intense, most honest, and most engaging fics I have ever read. What we see on the series is another thing, but when a writer dives into the horrors and the truths behind the celebrations, the adventures, and the fights, we see how all that will cause a family to keep going. You have written it so well and I am absolutely floored by your brilliance. I could not stop reading as soon as I read the first page. Thank you for writing this.