Reviews for In the Beginning
Aren serathy chapter 5 . 7/20/2018
*sigh* this story... gets me every time
Also yukio doing a sudo LALALA I’m not listening!
Admirer chapter 1 . 8/10/2017
Satan is probably the only character that I think you write OOC... at least from what I observed from the anime. I haven't read the manga, but the anime made Satan look crazy beyond reason. I just can't imagine the same character talking about soulmates and smiling warmly at his son. Your version of Satan seems mildly sadistic ... The anime made him look twisted beyond salvation. Like Yuri getting killed was the final straw... Nonetheless, i like the premise of this story, so I'm looking forward to some OOC fun!
SkippingThrough chapter 5 . 7/24/2016
This is incredible! The relationship between Yukio and Satan isn't one I typically get to read about, but I'm so glad I got to read it here. And all of the world-building really added to your fic and fleshed it out.
Aneki Okumura chapter 5 . 11/13/2015
Two weeks without an email address an I finally make a new one and get an update aand BAM! One complete fic and another with 2 updates!HOW COULD YOU EVEN QUESTION IF THIS IS A SUCCESSFUL ENDEAVOUR! ?! And omg the plot bunnies! I need to know how mephy awakened! I remember when you mentioned something about there being favouritism and something to do with mephy and lucifer so cant wait for that! This is fascinating! It also begs the question of wether rin and yukio are people of relevence in their past life during their time in the void or are their souls new, idk if I'm thinking of to smaller details. RENEE IS BACK! 9 '* , 3, * #TEARSOFJOY. Cant wait for more from Yukio's side of the story! THIS CHAPTER! Let me just dumb this down a little. Satan discussing sex with his sons mum while posessing one of her sons AND humanity is waging war against an entity that is on a mission to reshape the entire world just so he can be with a woman he has been stalking in this life and the many before it...this is gold...
I do have one question though, it all the other hell kings have to posess a host to remail in assiah, shouldnt rin have to aswell now that he has awakened as a demon? Or is that something that will be explained later? Ok so super mega fangirl rant over. This was an amazing read and I cant wait to read the chapters for the new sequel but I also need to sleep so it will have to wait #cries. Hope your little boy is getting back to normal :)
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 5 . 11/6/2015
Brilliant as always!
aww...its over... ;(
and what comes next is interesting...isnt Gehenna where Satan is? and didnt he say that she let her soul be held with him there? would it still be there?
keep up the incredible work as always
maxridelover chapter 5 . 11/6/2015
can't wait for the next story!
maxridelover chapter 4 . 10/31/2015
i see where this is going...
amethystfirechik chapter 4 . 10/31/2015
I like how you made Samael and Lucifer half human instead of fallen angels. If they were her thirteen set, were the other sets from Adam?
Suicide Forest chapter 4 . 10/30/2015
:C
Okay... not so sorry anymore. But it DOES make sense with the story plot and everything else, AND of his hatred to Rin and Yukio.
Suicide Forest chapter 3 . 10/30/2015
I cant believe I'm saying this, but i feel sorry for Satan.
amethystfirechik chapter 3 . 10/26/2015
Awesome chapter as usual. Love it.
Maxkumura chapter 3 . 10/26/2015
This was so amazing!
maxridelover chapter 3 . 10/25/2015
my this is interesting!
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 3 . 10/25/2015
wow...
amethystfirechik chapter 2 . 10/17/2015
So Eve must be Rin's mother first incarnation. I love this retelling of the first humans, though this generation seems to have memories from the last; or is it a post apocalyptic world with everyone's memories erased?
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