Reviews for Taking On Destiny |
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Lw117149 chapter 3 . 1/8/2017 More please I live this so far. |
mersan123 chapter 3 . 11/16/2015 Firstly, how childish of Arthur to put all their lives at risk just to see Merlin in action! I can understand why Merlin was ticked off. Morgana needs to listen to Merlin and Arthur. Lets hope they can still stop her turning to the dark! I must say I did love the scene of Arthur comforting - then tickling - a nightmare riddled Merlin. So very sweet. Do I detect feelings from Merlin for Arthur? If so, no wonder he is so sullen. Poor lad. Thoroughly enjoyed the update. Look forward to more. Many thanks. |
WEast chapter 3 . 11/16/2015 Hm, I like where this is going. I like the fact that Morgana is struggling with the good/bad thing- it just fits better. I still hope she chooses good, though! |
Assassin of Syria chapter 3 . 11/16/2015 I am liking this story very much. But please answer my one question. Is this going to be a Merthur story? I know that sharing a bed with your friend doesn't make you homosexual ( I am not one FYI ) but the scene was very intimate. So it will highly improbable if it doesn't turn into Merthur. I am a Freylin shipper. I also like Mergana. So if you're planning to make it a slash, please inform me. I am really liking your story but I don't read or like slash. Have a good day. |
WEast chapter 2 . 10/13/2015 Yay, Freya! I've always been a fan of those two. Can't wait! |
mersan123 chapter 2 . 10/12/2015 Enjoyed the chapter. Having Arthur aware of both Merlins magic and future events certainly ads a new twist to their journey. Still sad to see Merlin so old and worn in such a young body. If only he had a little more faith/hope. Lets hope Arthur can help him a little there. Many thanks, enjoying the story. |
B chapter 2 . 10/12/2015 I really love the idea for this fic, it's nice to see something new and original, with Arthur remembering as well as Merlin. Kudos for that :) I really like how you portray the relationship between Merlin and Arthur, I agree with you in that it's very realistic. Plus who doesn't like to see a bit of brotherly bonding time. Fics with good dollops of bromabce alongside a great plot are few and far between, and I feel you've got the perfect balance (not to mention the feels that hug gave me). You've done a fantastic job for a first multi chapter fic, and your style of writing really doesn't reflect that it's your first big fic - it's awesome! It all flows nicely, and everybody is totally in character. Yay! Really looking forward to the next update :) x |
thejammysod chapter 2 . 10/12/2015 Ahhh, this idea is so cool! I love it. :) |
lossofmerlin chapter 1 . 10/9/2015 I am so in love with this story! Please continue it. |
WEast chapter 1 . 10/7/2015 I love this start! It's everything I ever wanted at the end of the series! I can't wait to read the next part, and the next, and the next! The bromance is so strong, I can't stop smiling. |
mersan123 chapter 1 . 10/5/2015 Excellent start! Looking forward to this. |
Assassin of Syria chapter 1 . 10/5/2015 More. More. More. I can't wait for the next chapter. I am loving it. |
That Other Coin chapter 1 . 10/5/2015 Please don't let this be a one-shot, it's much too awesome for that. I have literally been waiting since the final episode for somebody to do one of these types of fics with Merlin and Arthur in it. Seen a l in other fandoms, but merlin fans don't seem to do a lot of time travel fics. Overall, great start, brilliantly edited, everyone's in character and MERLIN FINALLY GOT A HUG! :D |