Continue with the story, please.

More please!

(btw I had to log out to review but it's lucayathegood...u know, ur #1 fan)
Just a reminder that you're one of the best writers in this fandom (honestly, one of the best I've ever read from, period) and your stories really showcase that in a way that makes me jealous af every time I read them. I mean, how does one person write so well for both Max and Phoebe that everything they write sounds like it could be written into the actual show? (Except, you know, that Nickelodeon would never allow it, or whatever..lmao) So if you never do end up writing anything else for this show, or you don't come back to tumblr, just know that your blog and fanfics are a big part of the reason I got into this show in the first place (okay, some of it was bc of Jack) and that season four is literally all about Max and Phoebe, so if you never do write anything, that's okay, just watch the new episodes bc they're practically married anyways, haha.

COME BACK ANGELCAKE! Please don't tell me this story is going in the same direction as gravity and that there is more. I have to see what happens next
I find myself back to this story reading it over and over again hoping to find a chapter 5 and every time I am left with no conclusion. Please grace my notifications the presence of a new chapter to this amazing story!

I read this, now I'm addicted! It's stuck in my head PLEASE continue the story! prettyplease !

Omg this chapter was AMAZING! I don't even know where to begin.. damn Phoebe not giving in to what she knows they both want,i was so hoping for a kiss! You should continue the finale plot into the next chapter the way the season REALLY should have ended (if it wasn't on nick lol) really though that would be amazing and I really hope you update this WAY soon

Love it please update soon!

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Wait, what!? Max, no don't theirs other ways maybe you can send Link to the desert?

HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME YOU BROKE MY FRAGILE MAX THUNDERMAN PROTECTING HEART.

Okay I wish I could type in all caps for this review BC all caps is definitely how I'm feeling rn. I loved every section of this story, but the final part LEFT ME SPEECHLESS. I'm heartbroken that Max was turned down, because I know how hard it was for him to open up like that and I know Phoebe has to feel the same way - even if she doesn't want to-, but also I'm SO PROUD bc MY a bat inslly recognized his feelings and stopped lying to himself! And I'm insanely happy that you managed to tie in not only the prom aspect of the finale, but a reason behind why Max decides he's really going to take her powers. Like, I don't think we're going to get a deceleration of love tonight, but something similar would be amazing. Loved this chapter - I HAVE A NEW FAVORITE NOW!

Update

Update please iam so drying here in story

love it.

If this is like a prequel to Gravity I will have to say congratulations for making me cry even more lol. But if not, I love this story the angst. Chloe being so cute and sly. Update soon babes xxx

Please, don't do this to me. Do more.