Reviews for The Break In
Bethesda551 chapter 14 . 7/14
lmaooooo Mary Ann catching Danny naked as a jailbird is hilarious.
SexyGrl chapter 31 . 4/11
Such an awesome story! I have read the whole thing countless times. Favorites are the one when Danny needs to exert control, after the almost drowning incident, and also the one where it's Steve's birthday! All are great, though.
Bethesda551 chapter 31 . 3/1
this was a fantastic smut-fic
Bethesda551 chapter 28 . 3/1
morimoto is a genius. thank you for putting him in your story!
Sliver of Melody chapter 31 . 9/12/2018
This was absolutely fantastic
WRose chapter 2 . 12/13/2016
I thought ,at first, he was planning on leaving it there from the beginning as an invitation of a kind.
Harry Snape-Potter chapter 3 . 10/17/2016
can i be danny?
astragail chapter 31 . 9/20/2016
Wow! This whole story was amazing! It never got boring, you had a nice fluff and some drama. You really are a great writer.
macberly chapter 31 . 8/7/2016
That was an amazing story! Thank you so very much for sharing!
macberly chapter 20 . 8/5/2016
I love you! Lol.
macberly chapter 19 . 8/5/2016
Lol! Danny can be so wicked! Lol. I do fear Kono may start planting concealed surveillance equipment in their home and everywhere at the palace to capture them! Lol
macberly chapter 18 . 8/5/2016
Yes! I was hoping Steve would convince Danno to let him pick him up! Lol. The size difference is definitely an awesome kink!
boymommytotwo chapter 5 . 5/15/2016
Is this a thing... You silly boys... OF COURSE it's a thing!
boymommytotwo chapter 4 . 5/15/2016
My favorite part of this chapter is when Danny let's Steve know they're going to have a talk once they're done with this round, since he saw the pic of them with Grace... Love it. Love that it was tender and loving and serious yet comforting. To both of them.
boymommytotwo chapter 31 . 4/23/2016
I'm done. Wowzas. I'm sorry I didn't keep commenting... But it was a lot like crack - I couldn't put it down! Skimmed over the Danny-wumping chapter, that was tough but nice alert and well-written. Loveloveloved the eventual-proposal. Grace, ohana, the wedding, Charlie - in addition to all of the HOTHOTHOT sex... You're a master. A beautiful, lovely, thank-God-you-write-and-share-it-with-us-all master. Thank you. Can't wait to get on to the next! Xoxox
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