It's a rather interesting pairing, it most certainly a good read

Please add more

It's smut, yeah, but that doesn't mean it can't be well written or a fun read. And this I'd it :) I think what gets me on board is that you write in natural form why this female Boss would like her in a way everyone will understand. Mostly the paragraph of trying to protect Quiet from getting shot at was a nice touch.

Then for the actual Quiet getting touchy feely... Actually it was good too. More so you wrote it that works with who Quiet is. She doesn't completely change, she's the same Quiet who in game gives you playful looks and just taken up a notch when she gets open about being interested. So yeah you did good here.

This is really good. If your looking for ideas, I have one. Maybe Snake accidentally walks in on them making out or something and possible threesome. Just a thought. Anyway keep it up!

Im going to pretend this is an alternate AU where Paz is Boss lmao
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Need more plz

Awww, this chapter is absolutely adorable!

Not gonna lie, I burst out laughing in delight and amusement when that package of roses fell into her hand. It took me a good while before I managed to calm down and continue reading.
Big boss and the package dropping team now has my eternal respect. But I'm docking some points from Big Boss for that accent.
But god that was a brilliant plan, absolutely loved it!

I'm surprised that you thought the lemon was off. I for one think that it was very well written. It was both sensual, sweet, and romantic. Well done.

Thanks a lot for the new chapter, see you in the next one!

I gotta admit this is turning pretty interesting...

This has been fantastic so far I'm enjoying the relationship that's developing between these two. Keep it up!

What's this? Fem Big Boss is going off to a discreet location with plans to drop off a mysterious package? Did not expect her to be such a romantic! Ah this was a cute chapter.

Regarding your conundrum with planning out the story, on a personal standpoint, I'm currently enjoying just seeing their relationship develop as they get to learn more about each other. Seeing the way they interact with one another is adorable and heartwarming.

Now on a more objective standpoint, what direction you want to go in this fic is solely up to you. If you want to make this a pure smut fic, then go for it! But the problem with pure smut fics is the fact that most of the time they don't hold a lot of substance so it's difficult to become attached to the characters therefore reducing the length of the stories. Plus it's rather difficult to write so many different lemons while also making them unique without repeating the same thing over and over again.
You can also go for the combination of plot and smut, which is probably a better idea because it does give you more leeway in what you can write and balances out the story. And from what I've read so far, it does seem like you enjoy writing both the lemons while also writing development for the characters if the chapter with Ocelot and this one is anything to go off of. Now how you want to balance everything out is up to you. I'd say that you should just go with what your ideas tell you to do. If you have inspiration to do some awesome lemon or a really fluffy chapter, then go for it! You could even throw some angstier content in there if you want, it's ultimately up to you.

You're writing, sentencing, and grammar is good, you can write both sensual and fluffy scenes, and your characters are fun to read about! so as long as you enjoy writing it, then there really shouldn't been any glaring problems.

Really enjoying your fic so far, keep up the awesome work!

Ah this was fun, I loved how this legendary badass soldier is reduced to an embarrassed teenager when she's caught with Quiet. While on the other hand, Quiet is a lot more confident and composed. I guess it has something to do with the fact that your protag is still new to her sexuality while Quiet may have realized her orientation before she even met fem big boss. Or she simply just doesn't care, blase Quiet is always good to!

The lemon was well written, not much I can say about it really. There wasn't anything over the top about it and thank god there wasn't any awkward dialogue. Just seemed like two regular people (even if they're anything but) in the heat of passion, which is a good thing.

So, I've been following this since the first chapter and I've realized it isn't very fair of me to read without reviewing. So time to fix that!

Well to start off, this was pretty damn fun to read! Seeing Quiet so playful and flirty was amusing and the way your protag was so flustered just added to it.

By the love of God this is amazing! One thing, Quiet have green eyes.