Aww this story is adorable! It totally surprice me tbh. I had no idea Jane bought a ring! And what a chicken she is. Hahaha. Running away and talking in a rush like that. Funny :)

wow .. thats so sweet! you should write more haahaha. good job!

fabulous!

Very sweet.

Brilliant

This story has a ton of potential, but the "bugs" as you call them are very obvious. You can't read the story & get past them.

I hope you will continue cuz I wanna know what happened to mark while Jane was away.

ewwww im glad mart didnt get the girl lol

I loved this. It was very sweet! Great first fix, you dud an excellent job.

Awww! I'm a hopeless romantic, so this story was just right for me! I loved the banter about the Klinefelt syndrome :-)

I didn't expect Jane to flee the state as soon as she proposed, she could have done it sooner. Zombie stinky kisses, seems a little fitting for them. Maura and Jane would totally make up for the intimacy now there is a ring on Maura's finger.