Please update.

Really interesting story, I hope you're going to continue it!

Ah this is so amazing please don't give up on this story! I really love it! 3

You're getting into the beSt parts of the game! I really hopeople you continue this story on be day. I love Charlie's character, and I want to see how the story unfolds and the part she plays in these chapters!

This is so INCREDIBLY AWESOME! :) I'm so looking forward to see the next chapters. This could be in a Book version of until dawn, A animated book :D you are one AWESOME Author. Brilliant!

I really like your story as I'm a huge fan of Until Dawn and it's great having another character (which wasn't there in the "real" game) in it which makes the overall story even more interestin. I'm awaiting / hoping for further updates :)

Senpai noticed me .
(Changed my name if you couldn't tell XP)

I really hope Charlie finds a way to save Josh. Even though he was a gigantic ass in this chapter. Whether you update or not I'm still a fan of the story 3

*BOOM* I think that was the sound of my feels getting shot.

So good.. heartbreaking, but good. Can't wait for more. :)

I'm so so so happy you've returned! Back again with another wonderful update! I'm so sad to read what's conspiring, but I know it's a crucial bit to telling this story. I hope Josh and Charlie can work through this! Keep up the great work, m'dear! And don't stress the muse. If it isn't there, it isn't there. You should never have to force anything out that you aren't feeling 100%. Your readers will be here for you as often or as little as you decide to update, I can guarantee it!

YAY! YOURE BACK! YEETTTT!

THAT CLIFFHANGER COME ON WHYYYYY

I just noticed that this site has a problem with links. Plug this into the front of the rest of it minus the spaces: thetasteofcolors . deviantart
Maybe it'll actually work this time :P

LOOK SENPAI I DREW YOU FANART :D
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If you want me to make any changes, let me know!
Notice me for my mediocre art skillz that I use to praise your author skillz!

ah, goddamnit. I didn't want to read it because I knew it wasn't done. But I did. And now I'm wanting something I can't have. If you can't finish this, I will be forced to plead with a friend of mine to do it. Just so I can have some closure.