Of course, Goku is not perfect but he still loves his family and does love Chichi very much.
I liked it!

Oh this is a nice little thing. Such a good perspective and insight into Chi-Chi's character and how she thinks of Goku. At least by the "end" of things when she has all this stuff to look back on. You did a wonderful job expressing the way Goku approaches fatherhood and marriage through Chi-Chi's eyes. I would quote my favorite lines at you but I think I'd end up quoting a third of what you've written. At first I felt the subjects kinda jumped around a bit, but then that could arguably be her stream of consciousness, so I think it works.

I like this. It was nice. :)

-Reda

This is so accurate it makes me a little sad. But I still smiled cause it was pretty cute. This is really well write and didn't seem as short as it actually was. You wrote so much in only a few words. Fantastic!

Loved reading it! Great :-D sorry dont know much english, not my original language :(