Reviews for O'Neill and O'Neil |
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littleellie30 chapter 2 . 9/22/2011 Sam was never as innocent as some of these stories make her out to be. HE HE HE that was so evil! love it! Run and Hide Jack - run and hide! great little ditty! |
Jennaya chapter 2 . 7/15/2010 ROFLMAO That was great. I always wondered what the story was, and I can see Sam weaseling it out of Jack. |
yaelchen chapter 2 . 4/26/2010 LOL |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/12/2009 Very good. Very funny! If i was him I would have strangled her! |
RyanKathrynCelia chapter 2 . 1/10/2008 Very good, and very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing. |
Darth Tater chapter 2 . 10/24/2005 nice. lol. |
anxiousgeek chapter 2 . 2/18/2003 hee hee hee fantastic loved it ob |
colombe.de.pluie chapter 2 . 1/5/2003 Really cool story ! lol. |
shiplover chapter 1 . 12/31/2002 great! brill! great! |
ladyhound chapter 2 . 12/30/2002 cute, very cute. i laughed out loud. really. i didn't just lol i tipped my head back and chuckled. keep up the good work. |
dietcokechic chapter 2 . 12/30/2002 That was cute. |
Miscbills chapter 2 . 12/30/2002 That is so funny. I could see Daniel sitting looking confused, while Jack's eyes are bulging out. Jack's tale about his history with the other O'Neil is funny too. |
dietcokechic chapter 1 . 12/30/2002 Oh yeah! This is great! Original, flirty and just the right amount of mystery. Please continue! |
Luna chapter 1 . 12/30/2002 Not bad, but I'm going to suggest that you look at the tenses a little. For example, there's no such word and 'leaved' and 'they got issues' isn't proper englsih. The first should be replaced with 'left' and the second with 'they had/have issues.' Just a little constructive Criticism. |
Misbills chapter 1 . 12/30/2002 That is a very good plot. I almost forgot about the O'Neill and O'Neil, and found your story hilarious. Jack using O'Neil as his scapegoat. shame, shame. |