Reviews for O'Neill and O'Neil
littleellie30 chapter 2 . 9/22/2011
Sam was never as innocent as some of these stories make her out to be. HE HE HE that was so evil! love it! Run and Hide Jack - run and hide! great little ditty!
Jennaya chapter 2 . 7/15/2010
ROFLMAO That was great. I always wondered what the story was, and I can see Sam weaseling it out of Jack.
yaelchen chapter 2 . 4/26/2010
LOL
Guest chapter 2 . 4/12/2009
Very good. Very funny!

If i was him I would have strangled her!
RyanKathrynCelia chapter 2 . 1/10/2008
Very good, and very enjoyable.

Thanks for sharing.
Darth Tater chapter 2 . 10/24/2005
nice. lol.
anxiousgeek chapter 2 . 2/18/2003
hee hee hee

fantastic

loved it

ob
colombe.de.pluie chapter 2 . 1/5/2003
Really cool story ! lol.
shiplover chapter 1 . 12/31/2002
great! brill! great!
ladyhound chapter 2 . 12/30/2002
cute, very cute. i laughed out loud. really. i didn't just lol i tipped my head back and chuckled. keep up the good work.
dietcokechic chapter 2 . 12/30/2002
That was cute.
Miscbills chapter 2 . 12/30/2002
That is so funny. I could see Daniel sitting looking confused, while Jack's eyes are bulging out. Jack's tale about his history with the other O'Neil is funny too.
dietcokechic chapter 1 . 12/30/2002
Oh yeah! This is great! Original, flirty and just the right amount of mystery. Please continue!
Luna chapter 1 . 12/30/2002
Not bad, but I'm going to suggest that you look at the tenses a little. For example, there's no such word and 'leaved' and 'they got issues' isn't proper englsih. The first should be replaced with 'left' and the second with 'they had/have issues.' Just a little constructive Criticism.
Misbills chapter 1 . 12/30/2002
That is a very good plot. I almost forgot about the O'Neill and O'Neil, and found your story hilarious. Jack using O'Neil as his scapegoat. shame, shame.
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