Amazing work my friend. Keep up the great work.

Good story nice work on it

Very nice, although I think Uriel and her forces would be integrated back into Heavens military and Earth itself would be another battlefield after the seventh seal was truly broken and the end war begins for real this time.
And even thought I don’t think War would be so open or bothered by setting Samael free (just another foe waiting to be defeated after all) I really like it.
Using Basilisks as prey is also an interesting choice, I was waiting for War to point out that he could use his stone skin to hunt them without turning completely to stone or something.
I especially liked Wars “Like all battles an exercise in risk management” and Uriel helping War out against the Watcher “because it seemed like the right thing to do” was also a good point.
Also, rereading parts of it again I imagine if Strife ever thought about threatening to put a live sized “sauté” of War in is living room just for the hell of it.

This was a very nice read. I mean, your word choice and the character interaction matched it perfectly. Even outside of the dialogue, your vocabulary is varied and kept the words fresh as I continued to read it. That is awesome feat. of writing. Also, Uriel has been written down to a T. Such as her mission to still fight Hell even when support has abandoned her and her forces. The forces of Heaven looked severely outmatched in the games but I still understand their need to fight in the Endwar.

War himself was an interesting character study as well. Even with the Council he was supposed to serve still hasn't left his mind as well as the Brotherhood of the Horsemen and Horsewoman. (I really hope Strife and Fury get their own games.)

All in all, Great work. I loved it. Have an excellent day.