| Reviews for Taut |
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   journal-three chapter 13 . 7/26 First of all, I just binged all 60k words of this in one day. Incredible job. I love the characterization of everyone, its extremely appropriate. Even Hayate gets a role! I absolutely love that. Tangentially related, you taught me things about tetanus I never knew. And now knowing the spasms are caused by an inhibition of GABA release, I wonder if they can be treated by plain ol' booze? Alcohol gives its effects through indirect GABA agonism, meaning its basically a bootleg GABA molecule itself. So... just give Ed a couple of shots? Lmao that's probably definitely a bad idea. I'm just theorizing in the comments. But its a serious testament to this fic! I love anything that makes me think, and this has absolutely done that. I really hope you finish it someday, I need to know what happens! Thanks for writing! |
| motherdrukker chapter 13 . 7/21 I just read all of this today and I absolutely loved it! Tbh I really didn't see that twist coming! I really enjoyed the unraveling of the flashbacks to that point where it all came together, it was all done very well. I also enjoy how candid you are with tenatus, it makes me realize truly just how grateful I am to be vaccinated because, while I enjoyed reading it, this fic made me gag at multiple points from the grotesque things that tetanus can do to the body. Thanks for writing and I look forward to the next chapter! |
| Rage0fPhoenix chapter 13 . 5/8 ahh can't wait! this story is so cute |
| kagomeinu18 chapter 13 . 4/30 This is amazing! I dare say I am very sad you never finished it... Maybe some day you will pick this story back up and finish it.. For now I will keep a look out for an update. Do take care! |
| MiuraWtr chapter 10 . 4/28 Im sorry I never leave my review before Im glad that when I checked my fav stories, this story is update XD I love this so far it's a new knowledge for me and this idea is simply brilliant And I love long~ story so yeah this is definitely my fav thanks for writing this I will continue reading though |
| DaylightDark chapter 13 . 4/26 I don't understand what is happening in the last paragraph :( My english is not very good, it's kind of hard for me read this fanfic. Anyways, I love the way you put Roy's flashbacks! Usually I always skip the flashbacks on fanfics, but the way you put them is interesting, and they aren't long, so it isn't boring. Sorry, I'm writing to much nonsense things... Well, I'll be waiting for the next chapter! |
| Very Swampeh chapter 13 . 4/26 Great chapter! I really do like how you're tying in Roy's own past experiences to the situation. The detail you're putting into these chapters is great! |
| Geekowl546 chapter 13 . 4/26 This fanfiction manages to be surprisingly educational. I'm loving these updates lately! |
| waddiwasiwitch chapter 13 . 4/25 Great chapter |
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/1 Please please please please please please update! This cliffhanger got me crying! |
| waddiwasiwitch chapter 12 . 12/6/2019 Oh ouch. Delicious angst. |
| Very Swampeh chapter 12 . 12/3/2019 A great chapter- the ending was certainly a cliffhanger! And I gotta say, I really love having parts told from Hayate's point of view, it puts a new spin on the story. |
| lilaclily00 chapter 12 . 12/3/2019 I CAN'T HANDLE THIS I CAN'T HANDLE YOU EXCUSE ME YOU CAN'T MAKE ME FORGET HOW TO BREATHE FOR A SECOND LIKE THAT THERE BETTER BE ANOTHER CHAPTER OR I WILL SCREEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAM |
| Rex888 chapter 12 . 12/2/2019 Big oof. Big chapter, worth the wait. Been a while since I've felt that many emotions whilst reading, that's one hell of a cliff hanger |
| DaylightDark chapter 12 . 12/1/2019 Fuck D: |
