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Luna to the rescue. I like this twist when it comes to food and make in a real problem but not stigmatizing it. My youngest sister had a similar problem when we were growing up that was much worse that Harry's.

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So, I really like a good Huna friendship and you really delivered on one with this piece, so a job well done on that front. You showcased her canonical nature perfectly against the twist you put on Harry's - and I also like that you kept it somewhat light.

There wasn't much in the way of angst, and this worked to lift the story up, because you gave the condition the respect it deserved without overdoing it, and I felt that this worked really well with the rest of the story.

Overall, a really nice read.

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This was interesting. We don't really see if Harry's upbringing with the Dursleys had any psychological effect on his time at Hogwarts (guess because it's a children's book and has enough doom) but it would have some effect. Such a simple comment, said in jest and mild annoyance since Lavender didn't know, triggered a reaction in Harry that he had to get away before throwing up, even though he was away from Aunt Petunia. I like Luna coming to his rescue and assuring him nothing was wrong. Great job.

This was a very nice read. What I absolutely loved was that despite it being a psychological story, you didn't go into angst or dark yet you were never dismissive of the disorder. The characterisation of the several characters was well done (from the harsh Petunia to the unusual Luna). Really well done.

Seeing Harry with a picky side is something I haven't come across before. Normally he's shown trying to eat anything he can, due to the lack of food provided at home. That difference is well... Different. It was well done to. You brought out that pickyness and gave enough details that it worked and was well placed.

this was interesting. I like how you don' go over board with him freaking out. yes, it's an eating disorder, and it's bad, but that doesn't mean there's something wrong with the person. usually when people hear the word "disorder" they start treating you differently, when all you need is to be treated as every other person. so, I really like Luna's input here. great job

I’m an incredibly picky eater, I literally cannot go to a restaurant and eat an entire meal - there’s always something I don’t like (and I get too weird to ask them to leave whatever it is out), so I can understand the struggle of finding something that you actually like.

I don’t see how not wanting to eat anything blue would make things more difficult, since it doesn’t really occur that often without food colouring - I can only think of blueberries, some cheeses and there might be a type of fish (I’m not sure about that last one).

I liked the Luna/Harry friendship at the end; it would have been great if you’d explored that in a little more detail. But this was a great read, and I did really enjoy it.

Great story!

I like Harry and Luna, there are no errors that I can spot in the story. You used the prompts really well, well done.

As a somewhat picky eater myself, I totally understand what Harry felt about his foods here. Also, pretty much anything that brings Harry and Luna together is great in my book, and this was no exception. :)