Thank you for writing this. It's wonderful.

I wait in breathless anticipation for the next chapter!

This is good! I hope you update!

Okay! I love this story and I am well aware that this is a long shot but... Please update! :)

I'm really enjoying your story so far, I just have one nit-picky thing though: use the correct version of "your/you're"! This really stood out during Kel's chat with Buri.

Love the story, and as a writer I can relate to a love of commas. Keep up the good work, and don't worry, your editing is usually pretty sound.

Cute! I've been craving a classic Kel/Dom lately.

Thank you for a wonderful chapter! I especially loves the talk between Buri and Kel. It seemed right that she gave the advice to Kel. I was surprised at the depth that Buri showed because we don't really know much else about her from canon books. And for the use of commas, I find that they are common mistakes (I am an English literature major). Thanks once again. Looking forward to more

good story, keep it up x but at the same time, don't rush, look after yourself first then the words will simply flow xx

hey Moon-Goddessxx,

great to be able to read a few more chapters!
keep up the writing!
I know you can do it :)
looking forward to the next chapter :) :)

Oh, man, I am so enjoying this story. Thank you so, so much for writing it! I always wanted Dom and Kel to work out.

I hope you have success dealing with your depression, and find happiness in your own way.

I really enjoy reading this story and always look forward to the next chapter. You have a good writing style, and I never noticed the comma thing haha. Don't feel bad about not updating consistently or quickly, you are more important than your story. :)

I really enjoyed this chapter. I love seeing the relationship between Kel and Dom develop into a more intimate one. And I like Buri's advice. Keep up the good work and I look forward to another update!

As for life - I have lived with Depression for 7 years now. It comes in waves and you'll start to know when you are having the better days and the worse days. Hopefully you've got a good support system to talk to and/or are going to talk with a professional. Those are all things that helped me :) Good luck navigating this, it can and will be hard sometimes. But you're not alone!

This was a great story. I always wondered whether Kelvin and Dom would get together.

I still really like this story, but a question, what's the likelihood of you updating on a regular basis?