I love this story and the concept behind it. I'm glad you found a way to cope with writing and I understand if you no longer want to write this story since you no longer need it. I will say that I had a great time reading it and I hope to find others like it cause this made me like the OC insert stories a lot more. PEACE OUT!

Great story man, to bad its over just when it was getting interesting, but if you used it as a means of coping, then I understand if you don't want to write it anymore, hopefully by now you'll be over your father's death, whilst I'm too young to understand what it feels like to lose a parent, I know that the loss of a family member in general is horrible, but hopefully now you'll remember the good times you spent with your dad, anyways its not my right to poke and I bid you a good day.

Hands down the best RWBY fanfic with OC MC. It is a great shame that this story is unlikely to ever be finished

Interesting concept

Bah, who needs Aura when you have human ingenuity, wisdom(not much on that part considering how often we fucked up but we always shine through), and dedication.

I know this is almost certainly dead to the world, and if it truly is, I don't blame you.

But I want you to know that this is scratching an itch that I haven't had scratched in a long time (not since Faust ended his GATE fix fic, Here We Go Again).

This was and is a wonderful piece of work, and you've done fantastically with it. I can't begin to elaborate on that because you've hit all of the good points I can think of, and I say that as a writer myself. Though it looks like it's over, I just wanted to say that this was an incredible ride to read.

And if you ever do come back to it, I'll be the first person leaving a review on the new chapter. That's a promise. You're even getting an author follow from me, and I -never- do that.

I'm not sure what good this'll do. But reading Sillopsism, I absolutely loved it. I understand your reasons for not continuing it. Just know, it was a great read for 18 chapters. It might be incomplete, but for four years on, its been great to come back to.

nice

It's official... I hate the mc's Mind set.

No matter what military training Veteran of cold war trained to specifically infiltrate.

He was Naive and Easily deceived by the professor...

Good luck.

I hope the author is O.K... This is one of the most, well written and interesting ffcs I’ve read. It’s got an insane amount of rereadability and Ruby is still a precious muffin.

This story is absolutely fantastic! Lobe the OC's take on the situation in remnant, and his actions feel relatively normal. I especially like your usage of some military terms and procedures, it really gives the story some unique flavor compared to other RWBY stories.

Welp, if you ever decide to continue this, I’ll certainly give it a look. :)

So are you just done with this story? It's very well written and I would be disappointed to see it unfinished...

Love how u said that this story isn’t done, yet you clearly have put it one completed.

A fucking banger of a story while it lasted. Keep up the good work on whatever ya doin.