I'm so curious. I figured, from the description, that he'd be paying with sex. I hadn't expected her to specifically be asking for a kid though.
So that brings up my most curious thought. Does he get to leave after just having sex with her like 'oh that's probably done the job' or does he actually have to stay and keep 'paying' her until she's sure she's pregnant.
The second one only makes sense but at the same time I can't see him wanting to plan to stay there for long.

Oh my this story is quite interesting thus far!

Love your story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz.

Morgan is probably the most seductive OC I've ever read about. I love her so much though! xD Charlie's so cool too. You even kept Law's character in place. Hmm, well, please update soon!

I think you used the word 'ombré' too much, to be honest but other than your writing's pretty good mate!
I love how you write Morgan! She kind of gives off that femme fatale feeling/aura thing but I still feel like she's a bit softer on the inside (or maybe I'm just reading into it too much).
It's rare to see fics this early in Law's chronology so that's kinda cool. Personally, I've always wanted to know how he met Penguin and Shachi... (that thing about Bepo being from the mink tribe was sort of a spoiler for me since I'm not reading the manga so please don't tell me if t says in the manga how Law meets the duo btw).

So glad that you had updated this. This story is getting interesting and I thought it was how Law will got his beloved submarine. Never know that this story will get darker since Joker is involve in this story. Hmm kind of amusing how you chose to name your OC as Morgan, kind of remind me that succubus in that game. Well, after all, she chose a different type of payment from Law. Wonder why she had chosen Law to be the father of her child when she can have some man from a prominent family. So I think she chose to have a child rather than to have a successful marriage. We all know the consequences of what will happen to a child if the Government will know that a child had some bad blood on his veins, just like what they did to Ace. But I think Morgan is wise enough to know about this. So getting excited with that payment thing, lol. Thanks for the update :D.

Do you plan on continuing this one? 'Cause I gotta tell you witht his OC you have so much room to play around with your story. I'm kinda eager to read a continuation (if there is ever one). (Is this mayb one of the tons of LawxOC fics you're writing that mentioned the other day?)

Wait. What? That was completely unexpected, but really fun to read XD Law is so chill about this though (expected of the stone king) Your OC is interesting as well. Please update the lovely story :)

That's... quite interesting and unique. It's not bad though. If anything it's creative. I'm interested on what's going going to happen later on.

it looks really interesting good job

OH. MY. GOD. I seriously need to know what happens next! I just know this is going to be such an interesting fanfic. Can't wait for the next chapter!

This is a really interesting story you wrote. Can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep it up man! :p

That was an unusual payment for the yellow submarine with high class medical equipment. Ofcourse, Law is suspicious on that kind of condition. But I think Law will have no choice on this matter unless he had come out with another possible proposition. Will wait for the next update;) Hope to see more ;)

Well, that was unexpected. I'm really curious on where you're going with this and such. I gotta say though, I can't wait for the next chapter. :P