Great work! Keep it up and please update soon!

First part was really good, but you spent waaay too much time on the “vacation “ I can’t keep reading anymore.

*GR*GROAN* SSLESeveritus needs to be tied up in front of the whompping willow for this its always a great shame when a good author looses there muse and abandoned a good book part way through with this said I would still recommend reading the 1t book and this one as they are very well written , even after a year of been abandoned ill live in hope that the muse shall return and the book gets continued

This is an enjoyable story. I like how the characters progress and a lot of the little details you put in. There does seem to be a bit of confusion concerning the time the story takes place. There are a lot of things that appear in the story that give conflicting times. Which is minor all things considered. In any case I hope you continue this story soon.

please continue

Please finish this!

Thanks for a truly great read so far. I do hope you're able to get back to this at some point.

Where are you? Please update

Please continue such a great story

just binge read the previous story and this one, and I love it! please update soon!

I just read TBW and this... I'm impressed. This is well written and a fun story. I hope you can find the inspiration to finish it.

This is a great storyI can't wait to see what else is to come, especially in your tournamentthe tasks are obviously going to have a few twists in them from canon. Keep up the good work, and I hope there's more to come soon!

This was a wonderful addition. I hope Lyall is sincere and that Harry can get past his past and get to know him. Perhaps give him a chance to let Harry know what Remus was like as a kid and hear about him growing up (hopefully there were some good times). I like that they went to ask Sirius to check into him rather than just run with it considering what happened with Ginny's family. I can't wait for the next update.

Absolutely loving your story. So rich, so nuanced, so much to think about and absorb.

What a convoluted plot to get Harry in the tournament. These enemies seem more intelligent, resourceful, and vindictive than the originals, making this much angst ire and worrisome.

The concept of the tattoos has obviously proven themselves to be worth the time and effort getting them.

Loved your first task and the more international flavor of the tournament. A Pinterest with pics of your story would be so cool.

Keep up the great work.

I'm glad Charlie came around finally, and that he's ok. I love his reaction with the tattoos and I can imagine Molly's reaction (hopefully we'll all be surprised again like with Arthur lol). I can't wait to read the next installment and find out what the next task will be.