wait...
this is the end...?
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Please keep going this is really good

can they stop discord and the changelings in time and save celestia?

Twilight is heading back can't wait to read the next chapter.

This sounds a lot like Disney's Frozen in a way. It would be hilarious if Twilight falls into a portal into Erendale and meets Elsa & Anna.

wow twilight defeated the timberwolves.

will sombra find her soon?

Finally! I've waited forever for this

will discord make twilight his slave or his lover and will she fall for him?

will twilight abandon her friends for discord?

i love it please make more

more please more

so twilight was tricked by the two.

will they find her or the changelings?

Will the changelings find her first and take on the forms of her friends and try to kill her saying its for what you did to equestria? just a sudden thought?

The girls and Spike's worst fears have been realized as they discovered the revived Discord and the sneering Chrysalis behind the whole Archmage Coronation disaster all along having strung them in their plans for revenge. Luna was turned to stone and rendered the regretful lot helpless and Celestia was revealed to be mortally wounded and cursed to die within 4 days if Twilight isn't found until then. Reluctantly, the regretful Mane 5 and Spike hightailed on their quest, accepting the challenge he pitted for them much to Chrysalis' disgust and annoyance but what kind of tricks does the revived Master of Chaos have in store for the ponies responsible for driving Twilight away?

Now, it begins... Something tells me Applejack and the others are gonna go through their own trials of redemption for going against their own elements one too many times if they're gonna truly rescue Twilight after they find her, it ain't gonna be easy but I'm not holding my hopes up high for them until they get their mistakes involving Twilight and their betrayals to her through their thick skulls. And I can imagine Spike being the catalyst or mediator between his faith in his mother figure and his self-loathing for not being there for Twilight quick enough since he realized something off before the others did while the girls were caught up in the celebrations TWICE.

twilight is gone but Discord has returned will he cause chaos and without twilight there is nothing they can do?

Will the ponies ask discord for help in locating twilight and maybe even solving this case?

A storm is on the rise in the form of the freed Discord behind the flanks and back of Spike and the others following the shocking news of Twilight's disappearance/self-exile because of their second betrayal when they turned their backs on her believing Chrysalis' words in her false punishment for the distraught unicorn. Rainbow knew something was off even if she didn't have any evidence to prove Twilight's innocence and connect the whole disjointed story but even she was having looming doubts within her own heart despite all her confidence and loyalty. Will she and the others come to accept their second greatest mistake when they see Discord again and witness the return of Chrysalis and her Changelings watching their home burn in eternal chaos and disharmony or will they come up with a plan to find Twilight and bring her back before their friendship is forever destroyed?

Sounds like things are gonna put a huge strain on Rainbow and her friends but even so, I have a feeling Rainbow's loyalty and confidence has it's limits because of their second betrayal towards Twilight since they, even she, had now idea they were being strung along by Discord and Chrysalis in the queen's conquest for revenge towards the pony responsible for saving Equestria from her grasp and only Celestia knew before she was mortally wounded and left to supposedly die or be found in her current condition behind everyone's backs.

Chrysalis has infiltrated Canterlot once again and took Celestia by complete surprise to her own terror, leaving her mortally wounded and left alone in the Archmage Tower as she took on her form and unleashed the first stages of her revenge with a dragon in rampage mode for its stolen wealth. With Twilight completely unaware of the queen's facade this time and Spike suddenly suspicious about the affair with her given the phony order to reposition the guards surrounding the city, will Chrysalis finally achieve her long awaited revenge and throw Equestria into the depths of terror once she revealed herself and Discord makes his comeback or will Spike reach out to Twilight in time to find out what's going on?

Looks like Chrysalis is gonna have a field day when she finally unveils herself underneath her facade once again when Twilight's out of the picture and the Mane 5 suddenly getting the picture of the truth behind her revenge if they found out they've been duped and played for fools while also betraying their own elements once again. Things are gonna go south for the Mane 5 if they betray Twilight once again and meet up with the soon-to-be-released Discord.