Hey, I just had to comment be cause this was nice. Usually I am so NOT a Sau/Naru fan, unless they're like, a little side pair in another fic. But I found this under KakaIru and stuck around because the way you write them is actually interesting, so kudos to you for that!

So... Naruto went under cold water to get soft, saying "No way, I'm jerking off when Sasuke is on the other side of the door" and when he accomplished that... he started jerking off. Huh.

I love your story, but i also noticed a mistake. When someone's saying a long speech you may break it into paragraphs, that's fine, but when you do that there are quotation marks at the beginning of a paragraph but not the end until the last one.

("This is an example of the first paragraph of a speech. This is an example. This is an example. This is an example. This is an example. This is an example.

"This is an example a middle paragraph. This is an example. This is an example. This is an example. This is an example. This is an example. This is an example.

"This is an example of the last paragraph. This is an example. This is an example. This is an example. This is an example. This is an example. Note the quotation marks in this example.")

(Sorry for the repetition of the word "example".)

The quotation marks show the person is still speaking since the reader may forget, and with first person point of view it may seem to be an internal monologue.

Also in Naruto's speech to his parents you used the wrong "to". You used "to" instead of "too". He said that they were "to special to be replaced" instead of "too special to be replaced". I had to look back upon the words since it confused me a bit.

Though I really do enjoy this story.

I love it, you did amazing!

I freakin' loved this story! despite the spelling and tense mixups it was hilarious, frustrating, and embarrassing and I loved how you where able to make me feel all these different emotions while reading this story! I even had to take breaks from reading certain parts just cuz I couldnt handle it. I loved this story, continue writing I think your amazing at it!

hmm I think I've read the same yaoi that Sasuke was reading...

This wassuch a wonderful fanfic! The family fun, the perverted friends, the great humor and unbelievable ways they try to get the two idiots together XD This was wonderful, thank you for the experience! :)

Oh my gosh...I died of laughter! The conversation that goes on between Kakashi and Naruto ( the banter of weirdness) is the same type me and my brother get into XD I can't breath because it was so funny... That's great!

dayuuummm

OMG SASUKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKE. NARUTO IS HIS SUNLIGHT, OHHHHHHHH THE SWEETNESS AND AGONY. WHERES A DENTIST !

hot damn!

I totally saw that Dr. Who reference btw.

Sweet can't wait :)

yes!

do a married part! well where sasuke asks Naruto to marry him!