You write excellent drama. This was good. I'm just glad Steve's alive...again.

Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.

Great story. Thanks, Beth Palladino

Sorry it's taken me so long to read your story, but I've only just discovered it! I must have somehow missed it first time around. Anyway, I really enjoyed it and hope that you will continue to write DM fiction. I'm also very impressed that you did such good research(I think I should do a bit more of that!)the medical stuff sounded convincing to me!

Good little story and I do hope that you will write many more of them.(And I'm glad that I saw that chapter two was already out too.)

Good story. I hope to read more soon.

Annie

Excellent little story and the characterisations were good. (sometimes I wish I could learn to write short stories!) I also appreciate the difficulty of writing this medical stuff without medical training (or a nice paid consultant as I'm sure they had on the series) but I believed it. I don't think Mark is the sort to go for the field reduction when the hospital is close by, so again I think it fits the characters well.

I really enjoy your stories and am so pleased you've decided to write in this fandom. Look forward to more soon

Judith

a great story! i really enjoyed it and the idea of a series sounds really cool!

as for your medical disclaimer thing- if you hadn't said i wouldn't had noticed it all sounded very technical to me! coz it does make a difference when an author takes the time to research and as a reader i appreciate that. i'm waffling now aren't i? :D

bye bye alien

I liked this story. It was well written and quite captivating. And to me, having absolutley no medical experience, it was clear that you did excellent research. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

I really enjoyed this story, and it was obvious that you had done a lot of research. As somebody who has great difficulty writing a short story I loved the way everything was encompassed in two chapters. I for one would really enjoy seeing how much trouble the gang could get up to in ordinary places.

Tracy

This is very good, especially for a first attempt at a DM fanfiction. And the next part is waiting for me, wonderful.

Tracy

I liked the first chapter very much please continue soon with the next chapter.

I loved this story! Poor Steve can't win a tick can he! He just tried to make breakfast for his dad. Thank you for sharing and I hope you have lots more stories in mind!

Hey ya there! Well, though I gotta say that I'm not a sucker for the father/son relationship stories (don't beat me, please!), I really like that one! You character discriptions are very good, I could really imagine the scenes in my head! Hope you write more soon!

Bye, Geo

This was a great story and welcome to the DM part of fanfiction.