| Reviews for First They Came for the Death Eaters |
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Mary Eagle Med chapter 17 . 8/6 Shame on me! I am a trashy reader (I haven't left reviews) and now I pay the consequences... I want to know what happens next! Please, don't abandon this story! I know that sometimes the inspiration might go away, but I send you all my muses cause now I have to study so I don't want them to distract me, lol. But "siriusly", if you can, please keep writing this! I will probably reread and leave reviews in every chapter. That might help, I guess. Sorry for any mistakes, I don't speak English hahaha. Thanks for the ride! Mary. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10 "Modernized countries" are the ones responsible for the extinction of many species in the real world. Visitors from "modernized countries" hunt and kill lions, elephants and more for mere sport. A small detail in your story, but it really rubbed me the wrong way. |
Hetc chapter 17 . 10/10/2019 Thanks for this story. The idea of rehabilitation and integration is sound and I've enjoyed reading about the misunderstandings in the budding relationship. After this time, you are unlikely to continue, but it would be very welcome... Off to find and read your other stories... |
riversgirl75 chapter 17 . 9/8/2019 I’m working my way through your pieces, and wondering if this terrific story will be finished? Hoping so! |
Austione chapter 4 . 7/12/2019 Enjoying this story! Really different and the characters seem just right connecting who they were with the new life. Looking forward to more! |
Tom Riddle Minor chapter 14 . 4/25/2019 So, "reviews make you the happiest person ever?" Then what do you think updates make your devoted and affectionate fan crowd? |
Tom Riddle Minor chapter 13 . 4/25/2019 Soo sweeet... |
Tom Riddle Minor chapter 12 . 4/25/2019 This is good. Seriously. I like your characterization of the main characters quite a lot, and the plot is not like anything I've read before. However, I have two serious problems with your intro: The presence of the word "hiatus" and the absence of the word "complete". Could that be changed - please? And perhaps even before I'm hitting chapter 17, per favore? (I'm at 12 now, so... ;-) ) |
artemisgirl chapter 17 . 4/21/2019 Yayyyy! |
Ellae chapter 17 . 4/2/2019 I loved this story, especially that Draco seemed even deeper into Hermione than she, and she was still able to be concerned about her professionalism. That being said, I must confess: I accidentally clicked the last chapter instead of the title and read the whole last chapter as its own story. I apologize but I just assumed you were using an immediate, immersion style, since I recognized the “Death Eater rehab” trope and made the necessary assumptions. The thing is, it was still incredible. There were allusions, like Pansy and Astoria, that were slightly mysterious, but which I still generally understood within their usual context. And while Hermione’s return was a bit surprising (almost abrupt in the timeline of a one-shot, to get into that conversation right away, to me) it worked so well. I am both impressed and envious because this kind of tight, power-packed writing has been a great goal and challenge for me for ages. I saw the abruptness as efficiency in taking the story directly where you needed it to go. And it was so, so powerful for that efficiency. I also particularly liked the detailing of Hermione & Ron’s comfortable/bad habit type of relationship, very realistic. Also Draco as a lover— great job there. Forgive me, e |
SomethingCalledLife chapter 17 . 11/21/2018 OMG you need to finish this story. I love it and I don't know where you get all of your ideas but please keep writing! |
frekles chapter 17 . 10/7/2018 Really enjoyed this one too! I know my husband is wondering what i keep reading on my computer this weekend...lol |
Akorah chapter 17 . 9/29/2018 The complete inability of these two to communicate baffles and irritates me. If you do ever decide to continue this, I hope they'll at least attempt to get better at sharing. Hell, give them a house elf that can interpret feelings and tell them off when they're being ridiculous. I'm sad that this is going the direction of complete integration. I was really hoping for an inciting incident of sorts that caused the wizarding world to become separate again. Of course, I'm also hoping that Texas will secede from the US, so it could be that I prefer smaller self-governed populations. Still, you're a marvelous writer and I'm continuing my trek through your works. I look forward to whatever I encounter next. |
Riam chapter 13 . 9/17/2018 This was a nice chapter, your characters are so real. |
Riam chapter 11 . 9/17/2018 This was so romantic... |