this is absolutely amazing. most of the time, I am not one for coffee shop AUs, but you wrote it so well. kudos!

That's just too cute! I am happy you chose to post it because it is a really good feel-good fic, no matter how cliché it is.

This was freaking adorable.

Write all the clichés if you wish, I would have to problem with it. You write them so beautifully that you could write the cheesiest of cheesy fluff and I would just drown myself in the adorable-ness.
Oh I love bashful Kyle and flirty Eric, it's my favorite.

This is it fuck it this is my favorite kyman fic hell you are my favorite kyman fic writter i love you thank you for making my day so much better,i found myself blushing and smiling like a dork at my phone.

It's fluffy and cute that's what it is. Just like kyle. You know, when the light hits him just right.

C'mon! It's trully beautiful. They might be kinda OOC, but that's okay since it's an AU and they just meet, so there's not that old love/hate relationship. And yet you put competition into it and such and made things beautiful. My english sucks, so I'm not capable of telling you how great it was and how I'm looking forward to more Cartyle and South Park fics from you.

Keep on with your great work!

Oh Please, what you say?, this is fantastic, i really loved it, and can you tell me this will have a continuation? Oh please :C

Heheh. Took me a second to realize who Cartman even was dESPITE THIS HAVING HIS NAME IN THE FREAKING TAGS.
God, I feel so stupid.
Oh, and, EXISTENTIAL CRISIS INCOMING. CEASE ALL DEPRESSING ACTIVITY AND LIE ON THE FLOOR.

Words can't describe how much I love this fic... i'm squealing and smiling so much that i can't think straight x3

I get your point, this and others cliches settings have been overdone none stop but isn't this because, simply, we like them? like a food you tried once and liked it, I'd want to try it gain in another restaurant (fic) I think it's not the cliche you use to write but how you write it that makes the diffrence, I enjoyed this.

YAAAAAAAAAAAAS!
ITS GLORIOUS IN ALL ITS GLORY LOOK AT IT JEEEZ THEYRE SO CUTE
IM soo Glad you haven't stopped writing!
Oh if it makes you feel any better this is, I think, one of the first kyman coffee shop fics... At least the only one I remember
ALSO ITS HELLA ADORABLE JEEZ

Remember how I said I was psyched for this story? My psych-etude (?) was not in vain, for this was brilliant, fwend! Although I do take issue with your Author's Notes, "present tense is not my forte" I said, 'bitch, where?!' You should really write in present tense more often, fwend! In my opinion, it really suits your style. Secondly, you said the boys were out of character I - again - said "bitch, WHERE?!" Yeah, they weren't arguing or anything, but that's because it's an AU and they're meeting for the first time when Kyle is a cute, klutzy college student and Eric is this cute, charming barista guy (who I may have a crush on, thanks to you *narrows eyes at you* I didn't ask for this, fwend!). You know I like tall chubby guys and you gotta make Eric so charming, whyyy?! Anyway, moving on, poor Kyle. I love it when he's all awkward and gangly and can't flirt to save his life. And he's obviously very ambitious and a little smug, like the Kyle we all know and love. Secondly, throw some fruit on Eric and you know what he'd be, fwend? Huh? Huh?! A SMOOTHIE. Damn, when Kyle was like, "what do I owe you?" and Eric was like, "just your name," I was like *thumbs up* "Niiiiice" AND PHOTOTGRAPHER ERIC CALLING KYLE CUTE A BAZILLION TIMES AND KNOWING THAT HE HAD BEEN YEARNING FOR KYLE'S CUTENESS AND THAT HE WANTED TO TAKE A PHOTO OF HIM BECAUSE KYLE IS SO BEAUTIFUL, oh Kyle, of all the coffee shops of all the towns in the world, you had to walk into Eric's, didn't you? I'm glad you did, dude. Good shit. Also, Eric being described as angelic when he handed Kyle those napkins... Brilliant! Gosh, you know how you said in the author's notes you didn't know what the heck this fic was? I don't know what the heck this review is either. It's pure love for a terrific oneshot that I will probably read a lot of. Excellent job as always, fwend! QvQ

ahhhhh it perked my day right up seeing that my fave south park writer has finally returned and given me some quality kyman to read! and on top of that, the ever cliche coffee shop au? hoo boy i've hit the fanfic lottery. but seriously honeybee, this was a. cartman's flirting was great to imagine, and cute lil' flustered kyle, ugh, slay me. and then tweek! i don't think you've written him before. so that was cool to see. i especially liked the line where cartman said children in africa send his mom money, i burst out laughing at that, and i'm glad it was well received on kyle's end to. and you did well writing this in present tense man, don't worry about it. can't wait to see what you write next bro. xx