This popped up in the recommenced stories of a short thaluke story that I wrote, and it was absolutely amazing. You conveyed Thalia’s emotions so well.

That was very good.

Ohhh the feels! I love it!

This was okay, but you really should have made it longer you could have also added Thalia remembering some of there memories. Another thing you could have added was Jason, Annabeth, Grover, Percy or even any other person cheering her up as a simple reminder that she's got a reason to live for.
Good job

I love it!:-)

I liked it... It is one of the better oneshots I've seen so far, but you should've maybe put in more siblingly love(w/ Jason). Otherwise, a clean piece devoid of mistakes. Keep it up!