Reviews for The Selection
MrsSomerhalder849 chapter 21 . 9/6
Beautiful story, I loved it!
Om13811 chapter 21 . 9/4
Beautiful...
Thank you so so so much for sharing...
(what happened to the Romanians/Russians)
The story was really great...
Thank you :)
Om~
BarTheVampirePrincess chapter 19 . 5/19
I knew it.
Guest chapter 21 . 5/2
I love this story so much! I’ve read it at least 3 times.
Guest chapter 21 . 4/30
:)
BarTheVampirePrincess chapter 18 . 2/12
Bella got a new stupidy record
PurpleRain27 chapter 21 . 1/17
Great story, loved it.
mommymac0508 chapter 21 . 7/31/2019
I loved it
TheEasternWind chapter 13 . 6/19/2019
Your story is enjoyable to read but Bella is such a Mary-Sue. A lot of her background is just too much. Her family was so poor they were close to starving at a point in their life, but she can play a lot of instruments, compose, do acrobatic tricks and dance and sing. She is also a bit annoying in her self-righteous way. Sure, you don't need to like how other people act all the time but sometimes it's not your place to scold everyone around you. That can be in your head but acting on every impulse is very juvenile and most of the time embarrassing to witness. Sure, for Bella it doesn't have any negative consequences. She's the Mary-Sue of the story.

Her personality also contradicting. Either she is closed off and thoughtful like her father or outspoken, trusting and thoughtless/impulsive the way she always acts. Because baring your soul to some random dude you've only heard the voice of is so trusting and naive and not at all shy.

I saw that you didn't want any rant or flame, but I honestly don't think this comment is flaming you. I'm just dissatisfied with the character and the choices that have been made regarding her personality and abilities. I also didn't use any swear words nor all caps. Bye.
kneon chapter 21 . 2/20/2019
Loved this story. I have not read the other series. I have seen them around but didn’t know what they were about. Great jobthank you for sharing.
GeminiEyes chapter 21 . 10/15/2018
I really enjoyed reading this story, had me up way too late to find out what happened next until I reached the end. I suppose all good things must come to an end.
LadySixx chapter 21 . 10/28/2017
That was a nice journey and very well written!
Guest chapter 15 . 8/30/2017
Can you maybe do this book in Edward's pov
arorajames chapter 4 . 7/28/2017
Okay. So I just started reading The selection by Keira Cass, and it all seemed so familier like I had read it before... rewriting a book and slapping some vampires in it isn't really "elements" is it? Same class system, same events happen... I'm sure I liked this when I read it just seems a little like you ripped off the book.
hannaha11104 chapter 21 . 7/28/2017
Beautiful story, it had some devestating parts but otherwise it was an awesome story!
Melissa
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