I love this fanfic so much !
Waiting for you author

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS I JUST FINISHED READING ALL CHAPTERS OF THIS AMAZING FANFICTION AND IT WAS AMAZING! Omg I loved Allen and how he's always true to himself. THIS FANFICTIONS SO GREAT :D

This isn't really a criticism of your writing so much as it is the canon's: the church is written in a way that seems comically evil and incompetent at the same time. Everything they do is both infuriating to the reader to have to stomach but also goes against all of their goals in-universe. I assume that's just how things work in this genre of manga, but having antagonists that are transparently evil with no depth to them is boring and unsatisfying.

Please continue!

ohhh this is probably my favourite Noah!Allen fic out of all the others i've read...

the way Allen feigned being Nea was kinda heartbreaking but also really well done in that aspect, and i enjoy how you write his interactions with the Noah family, (somewhat) staying true to himself despite his inner conflict

i look forward to how you'll explore Allen's reaction to the 'truth' behind Mana and Nea. i'm prepared for tears bc i can foresee the breakdown

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

your fiction is fantastic

this is great, i hope you write more

THis was tons of fun to read! I love where you’re taking this! I can’t wait to see how you’ll tie everything up. I don’t think Allen is OCC. I feels like he deals with his circumstances, like he kind of just rolls with them. Yup, I love the premise of the story! Thanks a lot for taking the time to write and share your story with us!

Allero? I'm seeing more poker pair than that lmao. Not that I mind in the slightest.

This is an absolutely amazing story, one of the best dgm fics I have read.

I'm definitely looking forward to reading more!

Im excited to see how the bonds with the noah family will become. How wud allen manipulate the situation. Also agree that allen cud have a cold side to those he extremely loathes. Wanna see the dynamics of the noah family will change now that the 14 th is back. Have u seen the new chapeters of the manga? It was feeding my imagination about the possible history of allen and the 14th :)

I totally love this ff! I think I Allen is always capable pull out any emotion since he always put up 'Mana mask' in the entire time. anyway, I cant wait to see Allen training with Lulu.

Ah yes I know how youre feeling about glasses since J wear one too, but the lightheaded feel will be gone after a while.

i will be waiting for the next chapter~

I'm so happy to see a new update! I really enjoy how you write Allen and it's nice to see some focus on some of the smaller Noah members. Like, I get that some of them don't get much screen time but it's no excuse to lump them together or gloss over them! It's very nice to see an author using those characters.

Also scary actor Allen isn't something I see much either. That boy is one of those actors who act so much, you can never tell what's really the truth. And if they even know it's an act.

The Gamako scene cracked me up though. Poor Wisely just wants to protect his adorable little friend. I have a felling Allen isn't going to get within a ten foot radius of Gamako if Wisely has something to do with it.

Allen: Oh is this that frog I nearly ate?
*cue elaborate distraction done by a Noah because Wisely has ALL OF THE BLACKMAIL. Wisely runs away with Gamako*

I really enjoy this fanfic! May you never hit writers block and your words flow ever freely!