| Reviews for Funeral for the Breathing |
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   NekoChibi44 chapter 2 . 11/29/2019 She got through it and she remembered Kurama whispering in her mind to 'keep crying! They don't know how to handle crying kids.' OH MY GOD LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL This is pure gold. I swear my mom was looking at me crazy like “what the hell your laughing at?” |
| Ganzademon chapter 2 . 1/23/2018 Can't wait for the next chapter and more Please update soon love this story |
| ANIME-HOE chapter 2 . 7/14/2017 I'm very interested in reading more |
| Forgotten Lost Ancient chapter 2 . 5/7/2017 Oh this is pretty interesting. Looking forward to more updates |
| pissed mankey chapter 2 . 8/9/2016 Is there a reason WHY u didnt update till yesterday?! |
| BloodPokemon101 chapter 1 . 8/8/2016 Madoka? As in Madoka from Puella Magi Madoka Magica? |
| Emzy2k11 chapter 3 . 4/25/2016 Interesting story please update soon i cant wait to read the next chapter |
| sonderlee chapter 2 . 7/13/2015 Nice start! You write well. I'm looking forward to reading more soon! Some constructive criticism: -Chapters are super short! You could perhaps combine them, placing dividers to show scene changes. -Okay, so my first thought here is... time travel? If so, work those plot twists and keep away from the cliches. If not, I'm still keen for whatever you've got cooked up. Keep it up! Please update soon :) |
